A Little Piece of Heaven - Comments

This was the first Avenged Sevenfold fic I've read. I'm a fan an everything; just not a big enough fan to read their fanfics lol. No offense.:o Comment Swap sent me here though and that is one of the great things I love about Comment Swap. It makes you read things you normally wouldnt. :p I actually really liked this though. I thought it was way sweet and the baby thing was just the cutest shit ever. You have a great writing talent. And I adored this. Another thing is after about 4 chapters I usually get bored. But I didnt with this one. Which was just fantastic lol. I hope youll keep writing. Cause its awesome. Loved it. xox

Okay so I'll honestly say I came to this story because of the comment swap and I'm really as far from
A fan of Avenged Sevenfold as they come. With that being said I felt a little apprehensive to read this but I figured I would give it a try and I'm really glad I did. It's just got such a sweet undertone to it and I enjoyed watching him trying to learn how to become a dad. I think Aden sounds like the cutest baby on the planet and I absolutely will read more.

love this please update soon

AWESOME!Short shit alert lol

You need to update. like NOW.
i love it :3

Please update this. I really miss reading it.

Please update! : )

They're going to a bookstore? Ahahahah

Thanks for the update! : )

So cute Aden Declan Sullivan it's cute and goes....I loved the whole scene and the tenderness given by Jimmy to Aden...
Finally Brian asked her to move in with her yeesh...

It's 3:26 in the morning.
I'm dead beat.
But the only thing that was on my mind was.
Must stay awake and read Andi's story.
I'm serious...
*yawns*
Well yeah.
(passes out)

Aww so cute. More please

aweeeeee!
such a sweet chapter!

I can finally call him ADEN! I've been so close to typing that out when I do the comments. but I couldn't ruin the surprise!

:3 <3

Ok so it's really ca-ute and the outfit too...ok if I didn't comment before I have now....ok so the whole plot is well layed out and I love how it feels so real cause being a first time parent is so fu-I mean freakin hard..and yeah Jimmy is in for more surprises...overall love it...and I wonder what makes Brian run when all of that is mentioned like baby and marriage i have a feelin that it's something more...Idk but that's just me...

Love the new update. More please. By the way the Santa oufit is so adorable

hahaha that santa suit, I had forgotten all about that. also them being drunk all over the living room floor. ahhI missed this :3

Hey I remeber reading this before!!

Love iitt :3
update soon (:

Omg i love this story its so cute to see jimmy as a dad
Update soon please xD

Aw, I just read all ten chapters and I am in love with this <3
Nanagoesroar refered me to you : ) And I'm like, coolz, I wanna read her stuff XD
I'm srry If I came off creepy, but I really like this story. Plz update soon : )