The Air I Would Kill to Breathe. - Comments

Draw it out. I like this story too much for it to end!
:O

Awwwww, Alex got in bed with Jack!
:D

-kayt

you shud definitely make it longer
I rly like it
it's amazing
great chapter
hehe
I can Hekp but wonder whas gonna happen when they wake up
can't wait for moreeeeee

YES
ah man
I loved this happier
it was amazing
and the games begin
hehehe
giggles
update soon please
love this story

I really enjoy getting up in the morning to updates. It makes my day a bit better. :)
Anyway...
I love how it's all tense between them now. :)

-kayt

I love this story omg.
And I love how frequent you update!

I loved it
hehe
I'm expecting to read about Alex sporting a massive boner to sound check
so I better not be disappointed ;)
can't wait for more

Oh, man! ;D
Alex and Jack are a cute/hot couple. I like it.

-kayt

OOOOOOOOOHHHHHH MY GOD THAT HAD ME VERY VERY GIGGLY and extremely happy, GREAT CHAPTER PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

:DDDDDDD
hehehehe
I feel sp giddy and happy
yay

Poor Jack, getting a hard on over his best friend... while his best friend is right there.
Totally happens to me all the time. So I'm absolutely sympathetic here.
He's crazy if he thought Alex would leave tour for that soulless creepy bitch. :)

-kayt

YES! Alex dumped her! :D
YAAAAAY!
I can't wait for the Jalex to start now that Sophie's gone!

-kayt

YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
YAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAYAY
I LOVE YOU
I LOVE THIS STORY
I LOVE ALEX
I LOVE JACK
I LOVE JALEX
I HATE SOPHIE
ALMOST AS MUCH AS I HATE JISTIN FAGOOT BIEBER
AND THIS IS AMAZING

Alex, break up with that bitch! She just kissed your man!
Alex, I swear to god, I will hurt you if you don't dump that bitch right now!
Love the chapter.

-kayt

Be directed at Sophie, be directed at Sophie, be directed at Sophie, be directed at Sophie, be directed at Sophie.
You should update again!

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breathe breathe breahe breathe
breathe breathe breathe
I'm going to leave before I blow up on you
breathe breathe breathe
good bye
breathe

Thank you for all the lovely comments everyone :) it means a lot.

im not even joking, ive read 3 chapters of this story & im in love.

you, my lady, have AMAZING writing skills,

put up a new chapter soon !! (: ♥

I like it!
:D
Please continue. :)
Sophie is CRAZY! OMG! Possessive and needy, much?
Anyway. I love me a good Jalex.
<3

-kayt

SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS <3 ITS SO GOOD AND YOUR WELCOME BY THE WAY :) X

I rly like this
stephanie
I think thts her name
is a crazy bitch
anyshoo
I rl like this
nd I can't wait for more