Brave the Storm and Embrace the Rain - Comments

I'm in love. Really, I am. The way you wrote this, the characters, the plot. I love it. I love the twins, and the relationship you created between Eadon and Indy. But most of all, I love how the story ended. Well, I can't say that. Of course like all readers of any story, I want to know what happens next. But I love how this story didn't have a happily ever after. It ended with Indy telling him she didn't want him in her life, and him leaving. No happy closure, but sad open endedness. Well done.

Awwwww, you can't end the story like this! Please write more! ^_^

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a sequel this is such an amazing story!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a sequel this is such an amazing story!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE make a sequel this is such an amazing story!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!

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Firstly, I love the layout. Its such a pretty color and it goes perfectly with the picture you chose for your header. I also love the name Indiana, and I love her attitude. Although I wish you would have explained why her grandparents sent her to her father's though. But, I just finished the first chapter, so maybe you do! Haha.

First of all I would like to point out the layout. I love it. Its a beautiful purple and it's a pretty picture. Also I love how happy Brooklyn was; haha she was just annoyingly happy. I'm only on the second chapter, but I am already hooked. I can't wait to finish reading. :) I just thought I would tell you this now instead of later.

Well.. I'm not a huge fan of boy on boy stories, but this one stood out after the first chapter. I was too busy trying to figure out why he was trying to hide who he was, but I feel like it played a bigger part as the story continued.

You write with such confidence as Indy that it's amazing. I just felt like I was him and that's saying something given I am a girl haha. It may be the way he carries himself throughout the story that got me or just his dialogue? I couldn’t get enough.

I think it was the last chapter that really got me though. The raw emotion that Indy felt about Eadon (by the way, all of the names you pick were perfect) and his little "secret." It just ties in so well with the fact that his own father was never really around for him that he would react in such a way. I was just surprised about how unemotional he tried to make himself seem towards Eadon.

All in all, I think your story was brilliant. It was not difficult to read at all. I was more than happy to click chapter after chapter. Everything was just A+ material, down to the grammar and spelling!

I hope you make a sequel! C:

aww you should totally write a sequel they soo deserve to be together.

Aw. It's...the end? :,(

Ah! Squeal!.....Please :p

I love this story. It's sweet and full of real emotion. I can't wait to read more.

Gaahh, do not stop this story. It is sooo good :D. Keep it up. I'm dying to know what happens next. xoxoxoxo.

I'm in love with this story, hope you write more soon. [: <3

whaaat? i love this story, everyday i click on it to see if there's another chapter put up, i think it just made my day! hahah.

Can't wait for more!! I love it :)

Gah! I missed this so much! When I got the update email I literally jumped up and went OMGANEXPLANATION! But it wasn't :( Update soon, please! Meanwhile, you switched from first person to third halfway through the chapter. Just wasnt sure if that was on purpose or not :)

Gah! I missed this so much! When I got the update email I literally jumped up and went OMGANEXPLANATION! But it wasn't :( Update soon, please! Meanwhile, you switched from first person to third halfway through the chapter. Just wasnt sure if that was on purpose or not :)

And now I want to get to the bottom of this with Indy, we need some explinations, I'd really love to hear why he didn't tell her in the beginning. Thanks for updating, and mentioning my name, I was excited. (: Can't wait until the next update.

YAY! I love this story! I'm glad that you updated. I was getting to my breaking soon and would have soon broken down and told you that you should update. And you should...soon. haha