This story's heck interesting! One thing: in chapter...3, I think, she pulls out a cigarette, takes a drag, and then it's never mentioned again. I know it sounds silly, but it really messed with my head be ause I skimmed through the next few paragraphs thinking about how she could possibly have hugged herfather with a cig in her hand.
January 23rd, 2011 at 08:02am