I agree with everyone else on what they think is up with Lonnie :D I loved this chapter, I don't stop smiling from the beginning to the end. They are just too adorable and I love them, it's even better now that they are married! (:
Nick is such a sweetheart, I literally can't express how amazing he is in this. It's dorky how much I love him XD
There's nothing else I can say without sounding like a suck-up, haha. Your writing is incredible and you'd give Stephenie Meyer and Cassandra Clare a run for their money (: I really can see this as a book! Update soon, please! (:
Oh, and congrats on having four pages of comments for only two chapters! That's incredible, you deserve it. (:
Take a moment to picture my face right now. It looks something like this: :D times a million. haha I love seeing that you updated! It makes my days, especially today which is so not great. I loved Lonnie's interaction with her father throughout this chapter. I love how their relationship is so strong. I love that Nonnie are becoming completely official now. They're getting their own house! GAH! So exciting. But Taylor, you are k i l l i n g me with the suspense and curiosity. What is going on with Lonnie!? I just need her to have a panic attack so I can know what's wrong. I feel so out of the loop! or is she pregnant? Cause you know she drew the baby wolf and all. But I think we might've known if she was pregnant. or would we... You're gonna make me start jumping to far off conclusions soon! haha I'm dying to know what's wronggggg! Anyway, amazing update as usual :) And I followed you on twitter! Can't wait for more <3 .xoMar.
My minds seems to be full of Nonnie adorableness that i forgot some important things.
Oh yeah.. about Lonnie' getting really, really dizzy.. that's really worrying. hmm.. what could be the cause of it.. hmm and her weird inspiration about drawing and then, drawing a wolf but not Nick the wolfie .. i got a feeling it's Sean? because Lonnie doesnt recognize it. Nick's pack patrolling everynight... from who or what is that noise coming from.. You, Tay, have a lot of explosives, just waiting to explode. That just makes me want to read more.. i'm already hooked with this. so please, UPDATE SOON. :P
Gahh, Nonnie cuteness. Full of it and its just two chapters. I really missed it! :D
It's really nice to see (read) that Lonnie's doin some homework and Nick, having fun and patrolling...ALL seems normal... yet.
I've read these chapters like a few hours ago with my phone, i honestly wanna comment right ahead, it's just really hard and i feel like i will not be able to type what i really want to say, sooo... here it goes (dun dun!)
I kinda find their 'punishment' funny.haha. I dunno why! And i had a handful(eh?) of chuckles while reading.. one for example : Would it be absurd to ask Nick to phase and then tear it up? Mr. Cornell would probably know what I meant when I’d tell him my dog ate my homework… one of my favorites! :D I can't literally stop laughing at that part.. lol. I think i'm gonna love Lonnie more. haha!
and then again... I LOVED that the old cuteness of their relationship (plus Lonnie's somewhat fail flirting and Nick's awesome acting skills) is back. It's really nice and refreshing... after all that drama and crying in the last 3 chapters of LITS.
Will Sean be a big part in the plot of this story? I think yes, maybe.. Maybe being in Nick's pack is just an act then later, he's just not what he seems to be.. he could be one of the problems or one of solutions for something that has a very big impact on both The Great Witch and The Great Wolf.. (im gonna stop rambling, now)..
First of all - you updated! I mean when I got an email about a story being updated I kept my fingers crossed it's be one of your stories! And look at this, then. I was bouncing in my chair when I saw you updated Nonnie because this chapter made me think about Lonnie and the way she's been getting dizzy and feeling exhausted lately. When I added that wolf that looked exactly like Nick only smaller it got me thinking. Sure, a smaller wolf could have been Sean because we don't really know his physiqu yet, but I doubt that... I bet she saw their kid. Yep, I bet Lonnie is pregnant. Now that I got that one settled down - may I throw that baby shower party thingy? We'll all bring in some wolfie and witchie goodies. : ) [and just for Nick's record I found that pretty cute as well. Haha. Wolfie and Witchie]
Anyway - about her dad - he is so cool. I mean my father would have gone mental if he were in this situation, and I would be very happy because I would get Nick The Wolfie all for myself [but that's besides the point] . I wanted to say that I feel bad for him in a way, because Lonnie grew up faster than he expected her to grow up which must suck for him as a parent, but I do hope that he is happy with Eve, no matter if they are truly in love or just very good friends who are sorta, kinda into each other. He deserves his happiness if Lonnie gets hers.
Moving onto the next subject. I think that Nonnie should definitely live together, but I would have to talk to Nick about a few things then. Such as: he cannot be away from home much [who cares about his patroling when we can all have cute Nonnie moments?] and the next one - if he were home more I bet he would figure out that Lonnie could/must be pregnant [because Nicholas is just smart like that, him and his wolfie instincts]...
Well. That's about it for now and I will be waiting on your next updated impatiently. : )
eek! so cute :) the dizziness is worrisome. i hope it doesn't get worse. that's not a good sign. i really want to know what nick faints over! it's killing me!
First: Amazing chapter, I'm with everyone else on the predictions on what is up with Lonnie. =) I was excited to see this was updated, I had been looking every day for this story to be updated, my patience was wearing thin but this chapter was worth the wait like all your other chapters. =)
Second: For the first time I read a story all over again on Mibba and it was Eyes of Light. Normally I'd read a Mibba story once and that would be it but your stories are so amazing and I spent two days re-reading the Nonnie series. =) SO congratulations on making a story that is worth re-reading because the only books I'm willing to re-read are the Harry Potter series and the Mortal Instruments.=) It truly is an amazing story to read (and re-read) and I wish I could put it in my bookshelf because to me, this story is worth being in a bookstore to where I'd buy it in a heartbeat.
I have so many theories!
Can't wait for more :]