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  • shelbie.marie

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    i dont know why,
    but i really really love this story.

    begging you for you more(:
    love SM.
    January 5th, 2011 at 05:28am
  • sarcastichedgehog

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    Ooh, your story looks good so far! I have a feeling the twins are going to be my favourite characters ^-^" Watch out for # of characters vs. how much your readers can take. I'm a little confused on the whole Grant-Delia-Lila relationship thing (although I'm sure it'll make more sense later on ;P )
    January 4th, 2011 at 05:07pm
  • shelbie.marie

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    short be still a good hook chapter
    i can get a small feel for the story and really wanna do more.

    ill be waiting for an update.
    love SM.
    January 3rd, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • a falling star;

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    a falling star;
    January 3rd, 2011 at 10:02pm
  • a falling star;

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    More?

    Yes?

    Kaaaay, thanks. :)

    And, by the way, your Dom character is beautiful.

    Just, absolutely, beautiful.

    Yours truly,
    January 3rd, 2011 at 10:01pm
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