Long Road to Ruin - Comments

YAY!!! Guess what? You're at my house and we're having pizza isn't that awesome? Lol! I really did like this update; and stop swinging a water bottle in my face! Lol! I love having you at my house. KEEP THE UPDATES COMING!

Short but great as usual! I can't believe it's going to be done in just a few chapters!! I'm so excited- I can't even imagine how it ends.

I must say that I have tried to stay away from green day fics for a while. It used to be all I read XD HOWEVER I must say that this one is absolutely amazing :) Your writing is flawless but full of life. Do you understand what I mean? You draw me in and I can get a feel of everything that is going on. I also love the layout :) Amazing :) Please keep up the great work :) It is great to see absolutely amazing writers :)

:O Poor Billie!
They can't get a divorce, they'll work it out...right?
This update is awesome!
Really and truly awesome :D

(The banner that you have on the previous is amazing! I'm really sorry that I haven't been able to send you one yet, but I promise you that I will! Just been a little busy lately, what with trying to find a job, college and going to Birmingham! I hope you understand and don't hate me!)

Hope you update again soon :D

I'm going to say straight off that I don't really know who this is about, but it's quite good. I like the way you build suspense at the beginning, without too much or too little detail. It's also refreshing to find something that doesn't flow so matter-of-factly for a change, without any effort made in fleshing out the scenery, setting up emotional depth and so forth. It's really good that you save the space for such things, and not boring or tedious at all.

You are clearly a practiced and conscientious writer- congratulations to you!

I just stumbled across this. I'm really enjoying it! I hope you are able to update soon - please don't stop.

“Fuck,” I thought desperately, subconsciously. “I have a wife.”
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This made me laugh xD it's just like... sudden realization haha!

I like how you describe everything and you really make it feel like it's him writing this. (That's a good reason I DON'T write fanfics - i don't know anything about the characters) But anyway, good job so far!! I don't know much about Billy, so the fact that you describe him more is much appreciated. Sweet job(:

I read the first chapter and must say, its quite a good look into a person. With him describing everything that's going on, it makes it feel real and as if the reader is there. I will be reading the rest of this as well. :)

And also, with the way the chapter ended? It had me going: "You are really in some deep trouble now..."

Love it!
Sorry I've been a bit off, I'm in England right now.

Can't wait for an update :)

Love the two new chapters, you really have made a real Billie Joe character.

Personally I'd love it if Billie Joe some how went back to the madness and maybe stayed with Mike or something like that.

But don't let me kill your story by my suggestion! I love it just the way it is!

still amazed by the imagery u use :-)

Soo great!!
Sorry it took me so long to read- midterms!!
He's getting happier... at least a little bit. This story still makes my stomach hurt (in a good way lolol)
Update soon!

Aha, I loved this. As much as I love Green Day, never really read a fan fic about BJ D:
But, I loved how you made his character..come to life. Just the way you made it seem like he was a real person instead some guy we post on our walls and dream of being with.
Yikes, this was good :D

Finished.
This was, for lack of a better word, amazing. You have brilliant detail, even some interesting similes and metaphors. And gosh, if my son said that to me...
I cant find anything wrong! That's what I love most! Perfect spelling and grammar, and generally a great read!
And so, without further ado, I shall now subscribe.

Loved the new chapter!! They are so intense!! And I'm sorry for your fiancé :(

I am not done reading, but I'm liking it so far. It is very emotional, full of conflict and complexity. I like it, definitely. :) You do good to be proud of this. I don't have much more to say because I haven't finished, but the cheating-with-prostitute thing really did take me by surprise. I felt bad for the wife just then. I wonder if he'll tell her at all... I promise I'll read more when I get on again. I'm just pressed for time, is all.

Wow.
That was all I was thinking from the beginning of this chapter the the end.
It's getting so intense, and I feel like I say this every comment but its true.
Your writing skills are amazing! You NEVER have a grammatical error or a spelling mistake. It's awesome.

I loved the bit about the painting and the billboard. I felt like nearer to the beginning of this chapter, it was getting really, really depressing. So the ending really balanced it out a bit. I really liked it, and the idea that your giving Billie a new sense of freedom is really nice.

Well done, as always. :)

I'll finish reading tomorrow, promise. Sorry, and I will!

Before I read ====
OMG AWESOME BILLIE JOE YAY!!!!!!!
okay now I read.

I really really like this. I love how I can totally relate to the way Billie feels. I'm soo tired right now. It was nice hanging out earlier too. We have to do that more often. Also back on topic, I really enjoyed this chapter a happy chapter it's nice, it was grim at first, but it got good. I can't wait to see where this is going. I really enjoy this. Update soon please!