Raya Rose: The Opportunist. - Comments

  • blackenedrose

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    Got around to reading this finally. College finals coming up and pretty stressed out right now. But still procrastinating :) And this was such a wonderful way to do so. I liked that she's comfortable and joking around with the pack. Especially Paul. He's probably my second favorite wolf. And it's good to see that there is still in a strain in the relationship and it's not just completely over and everyone is okay. Very good update!
    December 5th, 2011 at 06:03am
  • blackenedrose

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    I really like this story! Please continue! Please, please! I like how she's sarcastic, goofy, yet caring and sweet at the same time. I also love how she gets to Jacob so much. I don't know what your plans are but I personally would like to see her interact with the rest of the guys too. Love it!
    November 28th, 2011 at 02:25am
  • cocopuffs

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    Yay finally they're together! But now I feel bad for marc:( damn him for realizing he might not be gay
    October 21st, 2011 at 10:56am
  • Lani

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    I love your story!!!!!!!! It awesome!!!!!!!!
    October 15th, 2011 at 03:42am
  • shaylove

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    Dang. Gay guy isn't so gay anymore XD
    Haha I think you should continue. I really like this story. It's original and interesting.
    October 13th, 2011 at 02:36am
  • blakkarma22

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    Don't Give up on this story. It's really good. If you need some help along the way I'll be glad to help, But only if you keep this story alive.
    October 12th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • shadow123

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    keep writing the story!!! <3
    October 12th, 2011 at 02:50am
  • BoOkTaBoOt

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    YAY! lol this is one of my favorite stories!
    October 11th, 2011 at 11:07pm
  • LovelySinner

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    PLEASE UPDATE SOON!? I LOVE ITTT!
    September 29th, 2011 at 10:18pm
  • Trig-ger

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    its amazing
    September 17th, 2011 at 02:11am
  • Bluecaty15

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    i loved it, you should so totally keep it up!
    And please update again soon!!!
    September 16th, 2011 at 06:28am
  • writhing

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    Damn, I thought I'd commented on this!

    Anyway, I thought that last chapter was adorable. It was so sweet! At first, I was like, "Jacob, you know you enoyed every second of what you two did! It was not a mistake!" But I'm glad he came to his sense. And I'm glad he confessed his feelings (well, sort of). And, I'm so happy that he kissed her! Raya and Jacob are just so perfect together.

    I really do love this story. Sorry for not commenting sooner. I hope you'll update again soon. :)
    September 11th, 2011 at 09:00am
  • Daydream Away;

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    Yay, Jacob kissed her! :D
    August 17th, 2011 at 04:30pm
  • shaylove

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    Aww :D FINALLY <3
    August 14th, 2011 at 03:01am
  • shaylove

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    First of all, I LOVE the title XD it definitely stands out to me and is cute and quirky :D

    Secondly, WOW, I love this story XD hahah, Raya is hilarious and Jacob FINALLY imprinted <3
    August 1st, 2011 at 08:57am
  • cocopuffs

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    Ha! she finally got her honeymoon night ;D I absolutely love this chapter because it is so cute and romantic! i can't wait for more:)
    June 16th, 2011 at 06:47am
  • writhing

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    AWW, that was soooo sweet! That chapter was just amazing! I'm so glad that he's finally accepted her into his life. Ahh, I just can't get over how sweet that chapter was! The author's note made me laugh. Thanks for the dedication! :) I'll continue to comment awesomely. :)
    June 16th, 2011 at 01:51am
  • cocopuffs

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    i knew he would somehow imprint on her, it may have taken a while but at least he did :) this chapter was really good please update soon!
    June 15th, 2011 at 09:26am
  • writhing

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    OH MY GOSH! He imprinted on her?! Finally! I'm so glad he's finally come to his senses about Raya! I loved that she made him all jealous. And when he kept calling her his wife, I was like, "AWW, he loves her." All in all, I love this story. :) I can't wait to read about what happens next. Hopefully you don't get another case of writer's block. I hate when that happens. :/ Anyway, I hope you update again soon. :D
    June 15th, 2011 at 08:12am
  • clearlyconfused

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    Please update!!
    May 12th, 2011 at 09:28am