Raya Rose: The Opportunist. - Comments

Ahh, I loved the newest update! I love that Jacob is all jealous, even though he swore that he'd never want her. It's hilarious. And Raya, sheesh what a girl. She's so spontaneous and I love her for it. I wonder if she really does have a hot date waiting for her though... Anyway, I'm going to have to say it again, this story is amazing. I hope you update again soon. :D

please update
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Please update!!!! =D

ahh! this is so good XD
shove that up your ass jacob! haha
please update soon!

Hi! I've subscribed to this story but haven't really gotten the chance to read it until now! This is a great story! Especially the new update, it makes you feel for her. :(

Oh! And I'm really hoping that you have a quizilla account where you're starting to post this because I found this on quizilla also, but only the introduction and the first chapter. Hopefully no one is plagiarizing it!

xox

I agree with the comment above. This story is great! I loved the newest update. It was wonderful! The ending was sad, though. And it makes me question Raya's earlier life. Was she abandoned as a child? As for Jacob, I like that he's finally warming up to her. I wish he'd just give her a chance and stop being so stubborn. Update again soon. :)

This story is great! I love the sarcasm and just the humor involved within the situation Jacob has placed himself in by mistakingly marrying Raya...I love her optimistic attitude that seamlessly annoys Jacob to no end, though he can't help but obviously get a kick out of it at the same time. She keeps him on his toes...and I love the fact that they're actually up to par with one another, yet worlds apart still. Jacob knows nothing about her, nor do we as readers, and that kind of makes it all the more interesting. We know she's using this 'marriage' as an escape from her life...but will the facade really be worth it in the end? And Jacob, poor guy, though his futile attempts at getting her to leave him are highly hilarious, he's yet to realize he's just a part of her plan. She's using him for what she wants...and I just hope that doesn't ruin things if and when they become a bit more serious with one another. But like I said, I enjoy the contrast in their personalities, and I cannot wait to see how you further this!

Update soon, please?
:)

Haha, I loved the newest chapter!
Raya is really something else...
Anyway, I can't wait for the next update. (:

The prude comment totally made my sucky day so much better!
Haha. I loved it!
-Lindsey

I LOVE this!
I thought that maybe he'd knocked her up or something, but this idea is even better.
I'm excited to read more. (:

OMG, I love this!
Hahaha, she's all carefree with everything.

This is going to be EPIC.
Update soon! <3

This is priceless!
I absolutely love it.
Can't wait for the next update.
-Lindsey

I definitely think you should continue with this. The first chapter was amazing.

At first I thought it would have been her getting pregnant or something.
But this is even better!
I am hooked already!

Update soon, :D

love it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! cant wait 4 a new updata

:D
OMG
you must update!