I enjoyed the part that limegreenworld pointed out as well, my rents yelled to me cause of my hysterical laughter.
The ending left me super speechless, and now I can't wait for more chapters. Chapter 12 and Hogwarts seem to not come soon enough, I guess patience is a virtue I lack :P
Hope your day is filled with greatness :) p.s. Thanks got the mention at the bottom, makes me smile super duper goofily :D
Luke it's a grumpy bitch btw i laughed so hard visualising Emi singing Aint no mountain high enough!!!!!!!!HHAHAHAHAH it was hilarious and now i the song stuck in my head, your entire fault!!! Anyway cant wait for the next chapter :D
This is definitely one of my absolute favorite stories on here and by the way most of my other favorites you skillfully have written as well. Thank you so much for feeding my reading addiction with such delightful and addicting works of pure genius. I hope that one day I can write and be half as knowledgeable as you. Your updates make my dark days a lot brighter and I find myself often rereading chapters and even stories like an old favorite story.
Sorry if this was quite annoying just felt it needed to be said. Have a great day :)
I love this story; I love this update; and, like limegreenworld, I love mitzi. The only thing I have to say is that when you write dialogue, try to make it a bit more realistic. Even though it's beautifully written, I feel like it's not something someone would say. I'm sorry, it's not anything against your story or you, because I do love this story, I just wanted to point something out from one writer to another.