Fantasies She Didn't Know She Had - Comments

Holy crap. That was hot as shit. I love the shower scene.

more deryk!!! you do a wonderful job of writing him

Yet another good Engelland story...the only thing that would make it any better--continue, please?
You showed us quite a different side to him than portrayed in your other Engo story.
I liked this story also, and would definitely read more if you would write it!

It's SUCH a turn-on imagining Deryk saying all those dominating things in the soft sexy voice i hear in videos. He's one hell of a man and I am so glad I found this story! Thank you for writing it :) P.S. total tease with the recount about meeting him at the end, btw...i love stories like that. I'm gonna be fantasising about him all day, damn yoooouuu!! ;D

holy shit. write more. please. for the love of god.

This was soo good. I wish there was more to it, but it did end on a great note.

I actually really enjoyed it. ;) Keep up the fabulous work.

Damn that was amazing. I really think you should do a story for him.

I think you should really make this a story. Please?

Oh wow! You NEED to add more to this story! Love it! =)

Damn, girl. This guy must be seriously hot.

holy wow.
so hot.
id love more!

Oh Phoebe, you made me laugh out loud with the comment about Jordan in your author's note! We all know you love Jordy! Seriously, the second chapter was hotter than the first! And I'm sure with your MAD writing skills you could easily turn this into a longer story, which I'm sure everyone would love. Even though that chapter was titled :"The End", I'm sure you could come up with a clever come back to continue the story. Although if you decide it really IS the end, then we will find some way to deal! :) As always.....GREAT JOB!

WOAH!! Saying that chapter was hot would be the understatement of the century. I agree with the others above, this has some amazing potential for a short story?!? yes mame - a little breathless after reading it. And even more jealous that you met him.
Love the story

i seriously love this story :)
update soon !

Loved this story and especially because it was about Engo! Wish there were more stories about this guy... In interviews he seems really gentle, but when you see him on the ice and in the video in the hospital, I can see where you get that character in the story from. ;-)

oooomg! that was reeeeally good! u should keep it going! it was aaamazing!

r u going to write more.....

I never know what to say when it comes to smutty chapters. I'm always worried that someone will think I'm a total pervert if I start rattling off direct quotes and chunks of the story that I liked the best. LOL. And I liked the entire thing so I could sit here all morning just copying and pasting everything that tickled my fancy. But seeing as that would mean people would have to read the chapter again through my review, I think I should just stick to some of the main things that stood out.

I really hope that Engo is like this. Because this is exactly how I imagine him. All this aggressive and dirtiness; all the filth that comes out of his mouth and the way he bosses you around and tells you what you want and what he's going to do to you. He's domineering and assertive and rough and it's so fucking sexy. All that naughtiness just leading up to making the actual sex that much better. And what was even better is that he gave her that slight moment of control in the shower. He's not afraid to relinquish it just a bet.

I commend you for having the guts to write about that 'back door'. There's terrified virgins out there (and probably some non virgins) currently cowering under their bed sheets. I just know it. I personally found it totally hot and realistic. Different strokes for different folks. What makes other people go 'ewwwww' makes other people go....well you know what I'm trying to say here ;)

I thought the ending was really cute and humorous. I liked how you brought the jersey back into it. But I have to laugh at the comments that Deryk is 'very sweet'. Say what? There was nothing sweet about him in the entire story. He was a fucking bad ass. An aggressive, rough and domineering sex God. Even his note attached to the jersey let you know that he's not someone to fuck with he. He knows what and who he wants and knows how to get it. No punches pulled. He just goes and gets it.

This was so amazingly hot and a great ending!

Holy crap woman! That was pure hotness. I loved every minute of it. This just goes to show how amazing of a writer you are. I'm hoping that you actually keep this going because its too amazing for you to not continue with it. And Jordan's a what? Did you really just say that about him? LOL. Great work!!