Fantasies She Didn't Know She Had - Comments

i don't want it to end yet. but if it must this was a good ending!

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I loved this!! And I don't want to see it end, but this is a good ending if it does. Seriously hot too.

Oh my goodness, I don't want this to end! It was amazing! <3
You should definitely write a full Deryk story!
And um I'm completely jealous that you met him!!
Lucky girl...I think it's definitely time that I move! lol

HOLY SHIT was that intense!!! Wowowowowowoowowwowowowow! That was quite the story!

This was.. Oh my God, I can't even comment on it.
I'm speechless.
Very good job!

Awww....He seems sweet. Why are all the good guys taken. Damn...LOL...Love the update honey. Cant wait for more

This was so hot!
I can't believe you called Jor a pussy man, to funny.
More please!?!?

loooooooooved this!
i can't believe you actually called jordan a pussy man!
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hahah i died!
this was SO HOT pheeb!
are we going to see more? pretty please?
thank you! <3

Engelland is hot as hell, end of story. I hope you keep this going!!

are you gonna add another chapter to this??

WOW....yeah, just....W.O.W. That's just all I can say! :)

short story, plz :)

please don't make this a one shot! it's too good to be so short!

You should definitely turn this into a short story :)

Turning this into a story would be AMAZING! <3

I definitely think there is short story potential here
and I want to know what happens next.

yeah I want to know what happens next. definitely short story material. please!

HOLY SHIT BALLS! THIS WAS SO EFFING HOT!
Def. continue this!

Holy Shit...that was WOW. O_O
I think you should continue this. It was awesome(: