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  • somebody_who_cares

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    February 1st, 2011 at 05:57am
  • Maggie526

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    Team garrett!
    February 1st, 2011 at 04:47am
  • roshambo

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    Still Team Garrett for sure :D he's just too cute. Plus JohnOh obviously doesn't realize how great of a girl Danielle is. He just likes her looks. So until that changes I will forever be Team Garrett.
    I like how she teases John in the park. It's cute.
    I notice how you always talk about photography in your stories. I'm assuming you're into it??
    I'm going to college and majoring in it :)
    February 1st, 2011 at 04:47am
  • coast of maine.

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    I have one thing to say.
    They just need to fuck and get it over with.

    Update soon (:
    February 1st, 2011 at 12:57am
  • Impending Desires

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    ahhhh! love this chapter! team john:)
    January 31st, 2011 at 11:56pm
  • itsahit

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    You know I'm rooting for Gary. I loved the part where Amanda was talking about Garrett and said, “You two should just fuck and get it over with.” That made me burst out laughing... Oh the options. The things I would do to that boy...
    ANYWAY, I adored the whole Danielle/John photo shoot.
    “You are definitely a sexy lion”, she said looking over at John with a laugh.
    “Did you expect anything less?”
    That made me smile. I may only have eyes for Garrett, but John being a sexy lion is definitely hot.
    I think John will fall for her, at least enough for them to hook up and Danielle will realize that it was only attraction, but that her BFF is the one.
    January 31st, 2011 at 11:09pm
  • Grade.A.Catastrophe

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    I'm still a team garrett :]
    January 31st, 2011 at 10:01pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    OMG IM SO INDIE. HAHAHAHA just kidding. I love the outfits you create for me!:D
    Anyway, I was like WTF JUST KISS EHRFERHFEH for the entire time I was reading. Dammit there was so much tension in the air!!!!!!!!!!!! And aww John is kinda sweet tho. And Jeez Im so fucked up with that guy, I really love him aint I?
    Of course, awesome, no need to tell you.
    <3
    January 31st, 2011 at 02:26pm
  • whilethefirewasout

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    I don't know why but team John! this is goooood
    January 31st, 2011 at 08:22am
  • somebody_who_cares

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    January 30th, 2011 at 07:32pm
  • StaysFourTheSame

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    LIKE :D

    I think Zombie Strippers are pretttyyy awsome!
    January 29th, 2011 at 02:52pm
  • coast of maine.

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    Bahahahaah, how funny. This story is so opposite to your others, I love it. This update was great and I'm happy it's finally here (: Update again soon as you get your computer back (:
    January 28th, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • purple_em

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    Poor Danny.
    January 28th, 2011 at 05:44am
  • heroine .

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    - Poor Garrett :( John n Danielle are so oblivious to his feelings for her ! Great update tho ! Keep up the qood work ! XD
    January 28th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • MYP

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    I am so team Garrett, it's not even funny! But I do love the awkward John part. Adorable. haha. I loved the update!! Seriously, so good.
    Update again soon please!!!
    January 28th, 2011 at 02:53am
  • roshambo

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    It's only three chapters in and I'm already team Garrett hahaha. But I'm definitely open to switching teams.
    I really love this story already. The plot seems really interesting and I'm excited to see where it goes!!
    The way you describe things is really great. It's all detailed and I can see it in my head, but at the same time it leaves space for me to imagine certain things. And it's definitely not boring.
    I also really like how you don't just assault the story with all the band members at once, but you kind of let then file in a few at a time. I think that makes it more realistic and not cliché.

    **And I can't tell you how many times i've come home drunk hahaha
    January 28th, 2011 at 01:05am
  • SpinningInCircles

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    This is fantastic as usual(:
    January 27th, 2011 at 08:04pm
  • DanielleOhhhh

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    OH MY FREAKING DIRTY GOD.
    This is amazing. I can feel what she feels (because we're really alike, I dont know how you did it lol) and Im imaging every scene in front of me, it's amazing!
    AHAH VITO IS THE BEST REALLY. And aww jealous John....I dont think he has to feel threatend by Vito, I mean he's cute but John is waaaay better. and jeez I laughed out loud at 'DO YOU LIKE UM BEER', John was really confused AHHAAHAH and the way he looked at her! JEEZ!
    He finds her sexy wehfhquwhefquheuhhqwufhuwhefhiuwfhfhq ok I need to calm down.
    I love you seriously!this story is so cool :) i love triangles LOL

    ANd I hope you get your computer back. at least you have this one and you can write anyway or at least go on the internet.

    I would love if you checked my new story called that's what you get. You know your opinions are important to me!!!!<333

    Love ya!
    January 27th, 2011 at 02:01pm
  • megustajawno

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    I don't know. I'm a sucker for douchebag John, but Gary is so sweet. I'm torn on who to choose. I loved it and I'm so glad your back. :)
    Now off to read Tech Romance. :D
    January 27th, 2011 at 01:38pm
  • sombersleep

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    Ohmygod, I am wow. I am really excited for the next update.
    :D
    January 27th, 2011 at 10:24am
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