This Is the End - Comments

Please make a sequel???????? This is my favorite story!!!!!!!! I need to know what happens!!!!!!!!!!!! (:

SEQUEL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Yes, yes, yes, please, please, please do a sequel. Ahhhh I really want a sequel. omfg I want a sequel. Ohhhh and I LOVED IT. Great way of ending it.

OAH OAH I'M PSYCHED FOR THE SEQUAL!

Wow! 0.0
John sure told Eliza off and hopefully that got to her.
Because she annoys that hell out of me everytime she tries to make it look like she can get John.
So Eric can see that John is still deeply in love with Annie and the same goes for her too.
Man just when Annie was going to say the three words, Eliza had to ruin it.
I am much looking forward to the sequel!!!!

I NEED A SEQUEL FOR THIS!!!
SHE WAS SO CLOSE TO TELLING HIM SHE LOVES HIM AND JOHN FINALLY STOOD UP FOR HIMSELF!!!!
PRETTY PLEASE WITH A CHERRY ON TO MAKE A SEQUEL <3

Awwwww I would love to see a sequel. I think this story is great. Good to see the two guys fighting it out. Looking forward to seeing what happens :)

It seems that Halvo figured out what John was doing and he immediately went there to stop John.
Now they are both pissed off at each other because they are going after the same girl.
Now I wonder what will happen next since Annie knows that they are there.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ok there is no possible way for this to end nicely lol.

awww i dont want it to end so soon :(
but im glad eric came...
john was pissing me off :/
i just hope she doesnt run away...
cant wait for more <3

im happy eric called because i felt like he was giving up on her :)
<3

Damn, Annie should just forgive John, but not be with him, and tell Eric that she needs time alone. She DOES need to be alone because she jumped right from John to Halvo and that's not good. Really just seems like he's her rebound.

Ok well I think that eric deserves her but I think she belongs with john. It was good to see a bit of eric in this chapter. Update again soon :)

So Halvo finally called Annie.
As much as Halvo makes Annie happy, I believe that Annie should be with John.
She loves him even though he hurt her so much, he makes her happier than Halvo does.
And her older sister can finally see that John never loved her and he loves Annie.
Despite that she is pregnant with his child.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

as much as i dont want her to forgive john
i feel bad for him he is trying really hard to make everything so much better...
but then i think about halvo, he MAKES everything better while john is just trying.
and i think that if she will ever get back with john she will still never be 100% over it...
<3

omg yayyayayayayay! I am so incredibly happy that things are looking up!

Yeah you updated. I was glad to see you did when I woke up this morning :) I loved the cuteness of the chapter. Update again soon.

Well at least John didn't up some bullshit and just told Annie the truth.
Though that probably broke her heart even more because she knows now that a part of John wanted her older sister instead of her and to find out is really broke her.
I would definitely be devastated if I found out the guys I fell in love with lusted after an older sister of mines (thank goodness I don't have one).
I don't think Annie can really fully forgive John because it was her older sister, now that she is pregnant.
That wound will never fully heal no matter how much time has passed and reminder is growing in Eliza's stomach.
Yay so Halvo is coming back!
Maybe he can get Annie back on track because John is just making things worse even though he is trying to fix things.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I AM SO HAPPY THAT JOHN AND ANNIE ARE HAPPY! and hopefully, John will actually say/do something good now! I can't help but to feel bad for Halvo though

this is defiantly one of the best John stories I've read. You did really well on this chapter and I can't wait to see how it all pans out. Update as soon as you can :)