This Is the End - Comments

he better have a good exscuse!
like he was druged or something...
i just hope eliza wont come in all the sudden with her lies telling annie that he cheated on her with many people...
cant wait for more <3

Okay I think I missed the update for chapter 17.
But I read it and I can't believe that Eliza is trying to get with John when he doesn't love her!!!!
I am glad that John is manning up and just trying to fix what he broke.
And now I am definitely dying to know what really happened before Eliza tries to ruin things between John and Annie.
Though I don't think Annie would believe her sister after what happened.
Eliza crossed that line and Annie will not believer her anymore.
I can't wait for the next update!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

holy shit.
what a bitch of a sister1!!
i need more please D:
<3

I LOVE THIS STORY SO MUCH I NEED MORE PLEASE <3

damn. Eliza is one crazy bitch!

Wow so right now Annie is going to make things right instead of running away?
I am proud of her because she stood up to her "sister" and told her that she doesn't care anymore that her sister fucked John and got pregnant with his child.
But she is going to make things right instead of running away.
I am still mad about how her sister could do that to Annie but at least Annie is trying to make things right!
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Okay. I like this update, but I think that both Eliza and Annie are so selfish. Both just doing things that will benefit only themselves. It's not fair. Annie just needs to talk to John. And Annie's dad needs to get out of her business. He's so far in, and he really didn't have the right to kick out John. I think they all just need to take chill pills hahaha.

Booyah!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love her father, because he finally showed his rage to John for breaking his little girl heart and spirit.
Man can Elizabeth get any conceited!
She seems to be excited and happy that John made an appearance since she is carrying his child ~shudders~.
Okay I just have to know why the hell did John start sleeping with that back stabbing bitch in the first place?
Did he have no self control?????!!!!!!
The more I think about the more I get so pissed at John and that bitch and sad for Allie.
I seriously doubt that John would be able to get Allie to fall in love with him again since he has a child on the way with her older sister!
I bet that skank was scared when she saw how angry her father got at John.
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I totally agree with whilethefirewasout
Annie needs to hear John out to get things out there, so they can hear his side and try to understand.
Her dad needs to try to calm down, I mean its obvious where he's coming from, bet let them take care of it.
I am not sure who's side I am on, John obviously loves her a lot and she loves him a lot. But Halvo is the cutest thing ever and I want him happy.
I don't know I am kind of leaning toward John, I want to hear his side of the story first.
anyhoo, I am loving this.(:
update soon?

I just think that John should be heard so they can know whether he's full of shit or not. And Annie's dad needs to calm down. This isn't his problem to fix, it's Annie's, and she seems too cowardly to fix it with all of her running away. Hopefully she only needed time to think and then she'll talk to John.

I feel so bad for Annie.
That must be so difficult to have to deal with living with your sister, who got pregnant with the man you love, who cheated on you. I just can't even imagine it.
But Halvo is going to be so hurt, I hope he understands that she loves John.
I can't wait to see what John's reaction is to her sister being pregnant.
I am kind of hoping she's lying and that the baby isn't actually his.
loving this so far.
update soon?

Dang if she just wants John then she should call him and apologize to Halvo because he's gonna be so hurt! John definitely wants to be with her so if she says the words, they'll be back together!

I can't wait for that bitch to get what is coming to her for being so stupid and acting like a selfish whore.
I feel really sad how of much of that cunt staying there affects Annie, she stopped eating and she doesn't come out of her room.
I had feeling that her mother would pity that whore and give her some money when she doesn't deserve it,
Maybe this will cause a huge rift between the family since their father is on Annie's side while mother seems to want to help that slut just because she pregnant.
Man John is going to get the shock of his life when he see that whore is carrying his child.
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I love this story so much!
I love how different it is and how many twists it has(:
I can't believe Eliza's PREGNANT!
I wonder how John's going to take the news, seeing as he still loves Annie.
I love this.
update soon?

I think that Annie is being overdramatic about this. Sure, what Eliza did was more than wrong, but she shouldn't be saying she deserves everything that she gets. Eliza might be making things about herself, but the way Annie said everything made it look like she's the conceited one. She did get herself into this whole pregnant mess, but it's not like she doesn't want to be carrying John's child.

OMFG!
I cannot believe fucking whore!
I just want to kill her now, she shouldn't have came back because she destroyed her own family by whoring around with John when he was engaged with Annie.
Just because her sister made something of herself and was with someone that made her truly happy.
I do hope she gets what is coming at her because she completely lost her baby sister just because she lusted after John when Annie brought him home.
I wonder how John will react when he finds out that that whore is pregnant with his spawn.
I am so desperately hoping that Annie's parents don't give that cunt any money because she brought this on herself and she has to get out of the hole she dug herself in.
And I really doubt that Annie's parents want to apart of that skank life including John after they destroyed Annie's heart.
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Man her parents really missed her when she left after she found out her older sister and ex-fiance were messing around.
So after their parents disowned Eliza, they haven't been in contact with her since the incident?
Now that is karma biting her in the ass because like Annie's father said, Eliza was her role model someone that Annie looked up to as a child and she did the ultimate betrayal by sleeping with Annie's ex-fiance.
That is a slap to the face for both Annie and their parents.
I bet that is John that came to the house, and I do hope that he finally sees how damage he caused the family and how broke up the family became!
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Eliza? John? agh, I need to know! But why would Eliza oh so conveniently show up at home right after Annie does? That would be ridiculous. Also, what did their mom do? I hope it's not too terrible. Thanks for the update, I like it!

ohhhhhhhhh snap! girlfriend, i'm on edge.

thanks a lot.

:-l

This is both John and Eric's fault!
Well basically it's completely John's fault for pulling that stunt when they were engaged.
Now John has to own up to the consequences for his incest infidelity.
At least Annie is back with her parents because they seem to miss her so much.
I wonder what her parents will do when she tells them what happened.
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON AGAIN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!