Girl it made my day when i saw you had updated!! I like the rediting, it was awesome before, and now its even better! Can't wait for the next chapter :)
Hmmm that was not very smart of her family!! leavin her all alone with him :P And she took her meds!! I still have no clue wat her meds are for, so ima web md it. OoOoO kissy kissy! Well this makes #2, so my guess is A) Hes using it to manipulate/distract her for his own gain, but at the same time B) He likes kissin her :)
Hmmm shes on meds! W@ell shes supposed to be.... that explains somethings. Ima guess anxiety meds... that sthe best i can come up with at the moment. IM SO GLAD YOU UPDATED!!!
OoOoO Kaelin got kissed and she liked it!! Well for a bit then realized it was a trick at got pissed :P but she still liked it for a little bit! Hehe poor Oliver, he seems like such a little wimp. He should NOT go into the 'family business'. Lovely chapter, short, but has some very important info in it :)
Haha I'm lovin this! Ok a) vincent (sorry my spellin on names sucks) is kinda psyco and b) you dont leave two hostages of a rival...erm... family together. I think that was rather stupid on her part. But made for SUCH a good cliffhanger!! Jeez now i really really wanna know wats go na hppen next :)
Ohhh shiz!! Gabriel found her :P dun dun DUN!! Hehe dude if that kid had be questioning me for 5 hours id knock his ass out. Its just too annoyin. So far I have found only one blob in this story.... But i wanna here your guess on who it is!! Lovely chapter, just as addicting as the last :)
Ahhhhh I lovvve it!! Its so addicting :) I cant even explain why your writing draws mw in soo so much but it does!! I like Kaelin, shes so confident and strong! And jeez if this thing has been goin on for at least 10 years.... I can't WAIT to see the fights and the games played in this story. Please update again soon! :D