For You, I Will - Comments

i love ur story keep it up updated soon plz want to know more

Cute!<3

finally! took long enough. good chapter, ish. could have used something new, since everything here that's exciting, like Lillie turning into a wolf, was already known

I can't wait for you to continue this story. This is the first sequel that I've liked that is in the pov of the kid instead of the parents in the first one. What I mean is, this story is awesome and can't wait for an update.

wow o think i like this one better than the first one and i loved that one i cant wait for more

Heyy,
Finally read chapter 12. It's incredible.
Hope to hear more about Lillie's new adventure very soon.

I really love this story too! Cant wait for the next chapter!

Ahhh, I loved your last update! Can't wait for more! :D

YES! I have been waiting for this chapter, and the whole thing about her and Nessie standing together is so sweet and then some other emotion I can't think of right now.. hmm.. yeah well, guess it's not that important. I don't know if you know, so I'll just say it anyways. I don't mind waiting for a story, if I think it's worth it.. and so far, I thnk your story is worth it. hoping for more soon. =)

The chapter I have been waiting for has arrived. AND IT WAS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!! loved the new chapter and am waiting the next one :)

Eh, not bad. I'm not sure I can pinpoint what it is that puts it in the middle of the scoreboard though. Maybe it could have used more action because its mainly supposed to be a battle scene, or the humor could have been more pronounced. It might have been more interesting if she only heard Embry's voice first. It also may be that with all the time Lillie took to adjust, the battle seemed too slow and not quite as action-packed

LOVED THE NEW CHAPTER!!!!!!
Update soon?

OMFG!!! I got so hooked I couldn't stop its incredible!!
You are such an awesome writer, a true inspiration to someone like me who's new to this sort of thing..
Are you going to keep writing? I hope so I really like this story with Lillie and Embry its cute.

Ooh- ACTION!!! It's so refreshing, after all of the high school drama <3 And so much happened in so little time!!! BEST CHAPTER SO FAR!!!

OH SHIT!

I forgot that she was Seth's daughter. I'm so exited for the next update!!

I have to say, I definatly like the sequal the best!

<3 ~ Meredith

O.o wow... did not expect that.. damn.. okay, I'm a little speechless right now. so I'll stop the comment here with a. more soon please..

Yeah I definitley didn't see that coming. At least she has a better chance now. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. CLIFF HANGER IS KILLING ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I can't believe that she turned into a wolf. Can't wait to see what happens next

Yep didn't see it comeing!

I love the update amd i didnt see it coming