For You, I Will - Comments

pink tuxes are really weird, but it's also not a big deal =] AHHAHAHAHHAHA LUCAAAAAS! I lurve him, he's so funny! Bananas...ahaha. I don't like them. The shorts are soo sexy, although I say if they hit the knee, theyre capris- not shorts. How can carnivals have water rides? o.O And I would DEMAND free rides for the rest of the day from the carnival owner- I mean, what the heck?! D:<

the thing with the banana is a classic and the whole kiss thing between Embry and Lillie is so adorable. . I hope you'll update again soon :)

WOW! THIS IS AWESOME! Please continue it!

" “You don’t know what Lillie needs,” a new voice added from the hallway. "
"You’re letting your past take over Lillie’s future, and that’s not fair"

THREE CHEERS FOR LUCAS! *jumps up 10 feet and does a major fistpump* (please don't associate me with Jersey Shore.) Hell yes to the hugely insightful older brother. Yippeeeee.

I got confused for a minute what with the "my dad hurt you" thing and then it clicked with the whole Dad-versus-Daddy thing from when he was younger. It took me a couple seconds to remember. There could have been a little more humor up front with Embry's explaining scene with Lillie. Sprinkle of sarcasm or something- you know what I mean. Lillie finally got her temper out! Yes! *blows confetti*

I'm not excited or anything...no worries. *starts blowing up balloons with a pump, a cake already ordered from the store* I'm glad Alex finally sees the light, which everyone else already saw...*facepalm*

And yay for honorable mentions....hehehe. Embry should have kissed Lillie before he left for patrol. ...did he? Maybe he did, but I don't recall. I don't think he did. If he did, just ignore this part and call me crazy. *pulls out one of those whistle-blow-out-paper-noise-maker things* YAY FOR THROWING TANTRUMS TO GET THE POINT ACROSS!!! (no I'm not excited...psh where did you get that idea?)

Oh, and I took it the wrong way. You should really stop being such a pervert!

ohhhemmgee(: love it! great idea

I agree with celestial_royalty, it could have been fun if ara got smacked or something.
I'm also glad that Embry finally manned up, it was about damn time - how long took it four years or so? of course it's gentlemen like to respect the parents whishes and all.. but still.. and I have never heard of anyone who has worn a pink tux willingly, pink SHIRT yes, but an entire tux?! and he didn't get teased at all, which is surprising - since kids can be cruel. But it woked.

The conversation/argument between lillie and her mother was really good.

All in all a good chapter, and I hope you'll update soon again :)

Oh my goodness! so freakin' intense(:

YAY! You updated!!
I'm glad Lucas stood up for her at the dance. I was like well its about time that boy does something nice for his sister! :D Embry finally told her she was his imprint!! I'm so glad that she finally knows.
But boy, did she blow up at her mother! In the end they understand each other. :)

I love this story! You have no idea how happy I am that you updated!

keep up the great work!!
update soon please!!

ohhh! I'm so glad Embry showed up to the dance. Plus I love the dress you picked for Lillie - beautiful. I can't wait to see what her reaction to what Embry said!?! Good luck with your school and please update again soon :)

YAY FOR LUCAS!!! If I were rating this on a point system, which I am for this chapter, that would be a definite 5 points. Smackdown with Ara is a given, which is another point. Fabulous dresses all linked in make a 7. Speaking of which, I wonder why no one made fun of Cade for wearing a pink dress? Oops, I mean tux. I just typed that out and I'm going to leave it. I suppose since Lucas is the brother, but I'd assume Lucas would tease back. Anyway, I definitely like that he stood up for his sister and has manners with Lindsey. Kudos to Lindsey for standing up for Lillie. Although it sucks somewhat that Lillie can't do the job on her own. It would have been nice if Ara did actually get socked in the face.

Other than that, at least Embry somewhat redeemed himself. I am still mad at him for instigating the entire thing. Boys and their freakin drama! Plus another point.

Finally, the truth comes out! Now, what is highly, highly, HIGHLY necessary is a cutting-edge conversation between Lillie and her mother. And I mean one of the "make-you-realize-how-out-of-line-you-were" (I hate making dashes between every word, it's such a pain), "force-you-to-really-think-how-selfish-and-unfair-you-were-being", "make-you-think-of-how-angry-and-hurt-you-would-be-in-Lillie's-place", and "make-you-feel-absolutely-horrible-for-the-pain-turmoil-and-drama-that-you-put-Lillie-through" conversations. One that absolutely pierces through her heart and makes her feel like a horrible person. =D

Another point for a long and enjoyable chapter, and mentions. I believe that makes 8/10, and if not then just say my math is screwy today. It would have been funner with Ara actually getting beat up and more emotions. Update soon!

Inspired by facebook I'm going to press *like* on celestial_royalty last comment - that was one awsome comment!

Anyways, I like this chapter and you're not that long in updating.. FYI: I'm reading stories with A LOT longer waiting time than yours :)

I hope you'll update again soon.

Can't wait till you update again(:

Okay, first off, Alex is a fucking dumbass. Seth imprinted on her too, and if anyone tried to keep them apart, she would have flipped a bitch. And also, her daughter isn't a fucking object. You can't own a person and dictate their damn lives. Even if you could, Seth has a say in it too! Lillie isn't just her fucking daughter! And Secondly, why the fuck is Embry being such a dumbass? It sucks that Lucas and Ara are bitches now.

Since you get to make threats, I will too. I am subscribing and giving this story a chance, but if Embry doesn't get his act together in the next chapter, I'm unsubscribing. It would officially ruin the story and destroy any interest I have for it if he doesn't shape the fuck up.

from the beginning i have been a sucker for Embry. I'm really liking the story and i'll be looking for updates :)

Yay!! loved the chapter :)

loveeeeeee the drama ;D

Update soon please !

I just stumbled across your story and I really like it so far *subscribes* I hope you'll update soon.

Happy Belated Birthday!!!! Hope your day was great!! :)

Another great chapter! I can't believe Embry thought she'd go to the dance with Cade... he screwed up big time lol
keep up the great work!
cant wait for an update! :)

Amazing(:

You need to continue! I love it. I wonder if Lillie will admit her feelings. Hope you update soon.