Wounds That Will Not Heal - Comments

I like this.
Even though I'm a fan of longer chapters, this was a nice read but I'd still like to see a thicker plot. Right now it seems a bit too vague and goes on too fast with no explanation. Especially the spots where there should be a moment of silence. At some parts the story has to support it and when it doesn't, it feels slightly out of place and brings me back to earth.
The theme is good and makes it easy to read.

How you've addressed Jo's illness is quite clever. Laura and Jo seem to be really innocent characters in this story from how they view Jo's cancer is an innocent way too, they seem to fixate more on the positive than the negative and in the last chapter it's as if the realization of how ill Jo is has hit them.

This story is so sweet. The way Laura acts around Matt, how Laura and Jo reminisce about their childhood, there happiness when Laura is asked on a date, it's all really well wrote and the way they act is so real.

There are a few spelling and grammar mistakes but apart from that this story is very well written. Keep up the good updates :)

When you quoted the song Prophecy form Asking Alexandria I was like 'Yeah song one likes this band!" But I love how it was relevant to the story. I love your writing style, the way the word flowed as I read the story. I was instantly hooked. I am totally subscribed! Really great plot line and everything. Can not wait for the next chapter, you left me hanging.

You're definitely a fan of the cliffhanger, aren't you? Every ending was like a new beginning. The writing so superb. Keep going with this. Your taking a very delicate issue but keeping your style and tone beautiful throughout. I love this.

I love this :o keep updateing!

Only just discovered this, and I really like it. I've just read the whole thing (so far) in ten minutes.
Subscibed. (:

Just started reading today. I really like the story so far. I'm sad that Jo has cancer but I admire her strength. It's a wonderful story. Keep up the good work. I'll be subscribing right now! :D

o.o i LOVE THIS STORY.

it's making me sad, though! poor Laura, and poor Johanna...=[ at least Laura has Matt to comfort her, though...and stupid doctor! the man does NOT know how to comfort a patient. johanna's such an amazing best friend...<3 god i really, really hope she beats the cancer. D= you are doing such an amazing job on this story! and again, im extra proud of you because of the fact that english is your second language <3 hopefully thats not creepy lolol xD if you ever need help with those tiny, hardly noticeable grammar errors, lemme know! =D you. are. an. epic. writer.

UPDATE! =D

Molly Mental =]]

I felt bad no one commented so decided to say I like your story...looking forward for what may come next :)