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  • Caitosaur.

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    hey! I got an award! Because I marathoned this and did it all in one sitting. As with "It started with a bet"
    and I would have marathoned them both together, but I went to Yosemite for three days instead. But not I'm going to keep on the marathon rampage and go onto Confidence. woot!
    September 24th, 2011 at 08:29am
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    This story reminds me of "Stay Beautiful" by Taylor Swift. And it super works because his name is Cory. >_<
    September 24th, 2011 at 04:48am
  • Danyelle Alesandra

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    Love it!
    Just read first chapter to operation beautiful,
    I awwed, laughed me butt off, and am interested.
    Toodles.
    August 10th, 2011 at 06:52am
  • vampireincognito95

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    (comments chapter 25)

    I totally agree with her reasoning. I probably would have done the same thing in that situation. Poor Corey, though. Everyone is blaming him :(
    April 29th, 2011 at 12:03am
  • vampireincognito95

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    (chapter 24 comments)

    lol 'black thunder' hahahaha. You're brother's FUNNY
    April 25th, 2011 at 04:15am
  • vampireincognito95

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    (chapter 23 comments)

    hmmm.... idk! I wanna know what was in the envelope!

    I would be your great aunt who always has gum in her purse ;)
    April 25th, 2011 at 03:53am
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    (chapter 22 comments)

    lol Trust me, I know where you're coming from, I have a little sister... that's why I don't let anyone who actually knows me (accept a few select friends) see anything I write. They don't even know I write lol ;)
    April 23rd, 2011 at 11:52pm
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    (chapter 21 comments)

    lol, okay, so growing up in an Arab family, you would expect me to know all about the rules of soccer, but I had NO idea what was going on lol. Totally had me hooked, though, so good job ;) Maybe next time a soccer game comes on TV, I shouldn't run to the other room ;)
    April 23rd, 2011 at 06:30am
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    (chapter 20 comments)

    awww... Corey like her!!!!! Corey and Emma sitting in a tree.... K-I-S-S-I-N-G...lol
    April 22nd, 2011 at 09:49pm
  • vampireincognito95

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    (chapter 19 comment)

    Jessica's too possessive. I want to punch her in the face... ;)
    April 22nd, 2011 at 09:40pm
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    (chapter 18 comments)

    wow my heart was beating the whole time I was reading Haley's freak out. It's odd how she doesn't remember anything afterward...
    April 22nd, 2011 at 09:35pm
  • vampireincognito95

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    (chapter 17 comments)

    *hyperventilates* oh wow... omigoodness... *hyperventilates some more* That is one fine piece of man. ;)
    April 22nd, 2011 at 09:01pm
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    (chapter 16 comments)

    wow... didn't see that one coming... I wouldn't have guessed that Janice had a thing for Corey
    April 22nd, 2011 at 08:54pm
  • vampireincognito95

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    (comments chapter 15)

    OHEMGEEE!!!! lol. Is Trevor actually gonna go take his shirt off? In school? lol. I would love to see that *embarrassed blush*
    April 22nd, 2011 at 08:48pm
  • vampireincognito95

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    (chapter 14 comments)

    I DON'T LIKE JESSICA!!!!!!!! I'm pretty sure I've said that before, but I'll say it again anyway... Can't she see that Emma and Corey are perfect together?!?!?! Gah! Selfish biotch.

    Okay, rant over... onto the next chapter!!!
    April 22nd, 2011 at 08:40pm
  • vampireincognito95

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    (comments chapter 13)

    awww!!! They're so cute together!!! 'It started with a bet' lol haha
    April 22nd, 2011 at 08:34pm
  • vampireincognito95

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    (comments chapter 12)

    lol 'I'd rather be hit by a house.' lol that made me laugh

    I think Matt figured out what Jessica is up to and went to tell her to stop...?
    April 22nd, 2011 at 01:28am
  • vampireincognito95

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    (comment chapter 11)

    okay, so I thought it was pretty obvious that Jessica had a crush on Corey from the beginning, but I do NOT like her what so ever. I think she's a bad friend for Emma. but Emma and Corey would be SOOOO cute together lol.

    No, I did not over look the underwear post-it note. Which means that Emma know that Corey is the mystery player!!! Yay!
    April 22nd, 2011 at 01:21am
  • vampireincognito95

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    (comments chapter 10)

    oh that is a load of BS!!! Emma definitely has a thing for Corey and Jessica is being a b**** for not realizing it / lying about it......... or maybe I'm wrong and she actually does... hmmm...
    April 22nd, 2011 at 01:12am
  • vampireincognito95

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    (comments chapter 9)

    lol Yeah! that was a brilliant delivery! haley's such an actress... that doesn't show emotions... never mind, i'll shut up now...*zips lips*
    April 22nd, 2011 at 01:00am