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  • vampireincognito95

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    (comments chapter 8)

    I DONT KNOW!!!!! this is so complicated lol. how in the world is he gonna pull this off?!?!?! *pulls hair out* oh wait! *slaps forehead* i can just read the next chapter... ;) lol
    April 22nd, 2011 at 12:53am
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    (comments chapter 7)

    I think its good that you put the review in, one for those who don't know the story and two, so that we can see was happened from corey's perspective for those who have read ISWAB
    April 21st, 2011 at 09:17pm
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    (comments chapter 6)

    I really wanna know whats going on with Trevor and Haley...

    lol nice mulan reference, but I don't think eddie murphy was the one to say that... way be im thinking about something different than you were?
    April 21st, 2011 at 09:01pm
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    (comments chapter 5)

    lol communist in the bushes.... you really crack me up sometimes lol
    I REALLY WANT TO TRY THIS!!!!!!!!!!
    April 21st, 2011 at 08:48pm
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    (comments to chapter 4)

    lol I might actually start this game with somebody at my school. it sound like fun ;)
    April 21st, 2011 at 08:34pm
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    (comment to chapter 3)

    'that's what she said' lol hahahahahaha
    April 21st, 2011 at 07:14pm
  • vampireincognito95

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    omigoodness that was so sad... Poor emileigh (sp?). I would be crying too is someone said they'd rather kiss a horse than me aww...

    (my comment to chapter 2)
    April 21st, 2011 at 07:06pm
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    lol okay, well i did NOT like corey very much when I was reading ISWAB, but now I realize that he's actually a sweet guy. lol

    (this is my comment on ch 1)
    April 21st, 2011 at 06:47pm
  • ThatOneBrownKid

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    well then. im at that point where you told me to comment. the "what are you doing here, corey" chapter. andddddddddd
    not bad!
    i thought it was kinda short tho. well just this section. tho perhaps that adds to the whole mood of the chapter.
    in other news: i love the quotes from "Mr. P" :D
    awesomeness
    April 13th, 2011 at 06:12am
  • ThatOneBrownKid

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    As pathetic as it is for me to admit it, i have to say I love these stories. :D they are awesome and make me smile.

    Though you know what would complete these stories and make them even better and attract a male fanbase? lightsabers. nuf said. :D
    April 11th, 2011 at 06:23am
  • lcleary777

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    this story is so adorable <3 <3 <3

    i love how us reader get a kinda double P.O.V. of both Coreleigh and Taley.

    Mixing in stuff from It Started With a Bet... was spectacular!

    btw, i just read this (basically) in one setting (apart from eating lunch and dinner).

    This story is just.... amazing <3

    i <3 the whole "post-it" idea, too!!! Very clever <3
    April 5th, 2011 at 08:54am
  • lcleary777

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    im just commenting before i read this.

    just to show you that im here. XD

    ;RHGAOERHG;OAER
    i cannot wait to read this.

    <3
    April 4th, 2011 at 06:26pm
  • LikeAHawk

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    Alright:) Finally done haha here's my favorite quote, it cracked me up!

    “That’s it!” Matt yells loudly. “I’m going gay!” His exclamation makes quite a few people turn heads. “Girls are too high maintenance.”

    “Let’s be a gay couple,” Spike says, leaning his head against the sushi bar. “If I have to go shopping for a girl again, I may die.” The two boys look one another up and down for a second.

    “You know what? Never mind,” Matt says.
    “Yeah. Totally not attracted to you," Spike agrees.
    “No offense,” they say in unison.

    BEST QUOTE EVER!

    I literally might paint it onto my wall in my room hahah
    March 28th, 2011 at 09:46pm
  • LikeAHawk

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    AHH! I knew it! as soon as she started listing off the symptoms I had my Nick Jonas fan moment and was like DIABETES! and my puppy was asleep on my legs and I jerked when I yelled it so he jumped up and started barking at me cuz I scared him ^_^
    March 28th, 2011 at 05:08am
  • LikeAHawk

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    Alright so I'm currently reading chapter 27 (I've been having a two day marathon of reading this series for the first time) and I figured I'd comment on one of my observations

    Emma seems to leave a lot for breaks, like at the party, she went to the bathroom three times and during the sleepover in ch. 27 where Jessica comes down stairs at noon with a sleepy Emma behind her and explains that Emma got up a couple of times during the night.

    So now I'm wondering what that's about and it's killing me cause I dont know!

    ah well, I guess I'll keep reading to find out:D

    P.S. Killer Series! I love it so much!
    March 28th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • Monica Beth

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    OMG!!!!!!! I cannot express how much i was longing to get into the part that Corey confesses his love for her! The detail of how he said it was so romantic &Cute!
    <@<@<@<@<@<@<@<@<@<@<@<@ <- they're a bouquet of roses xP
    I love this story!
    March 28th, 2011 at 02:05am
  • livelifetolove

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    Okay. It's three in the morning..again. But I just want to say I finally finished the whole thing and loved it. <3
    My favorite parts were the funny parts. You had me laughing like crazy. And crying as well.

    I can't wait for tomorrow so I can start Confidence. Janice is the bomb. lol.
    March 26th, 2011 at 02:23pm
  • Monkey :D

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    This was an amazing story. Good characters, some devious twists. I'm almost sad that it's over :/ Definitely had a lot of fun reading it. I'm gonna have to check if you posted the new one up yet lol. Please do not stop writing stories! :D
    March 25th, 2011 at 01:59am
  • NeverForgetMemories

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    (And when I mean by Jessica's friends being mean, it's by daring Emmaleigh(sp?) to do that dare.. when they knew she was really shy!) (:
    March 19th, 2011 at 12:12am
  • NeverForgetMemories

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    OKAY. So. I just finished reading chapter two. ;D
    1. I am guessing that Emmaleigh(sp?) may be Corey's one true love? ;D
    2. LOLOL. And the boxers thing, I can relate. ^-^ I have a younger cousin, Tommy, who had a sleepover for his birthday. They played a truth or dare game, and one of them had to kiss me on the cheek. XD It was cute. (: They were like, 6 at the time? Innocent kids. Now they're like 10 or something.. Annoying more than ever! <3
    ANYWAYS, back on topic! I really liked the humor in this chapter, the boxers episode cracked me up really badly.. But the ending was so mean! :( Jessica's friends are either super mean, or just plain annoying XD <3
    Now, Imma go back to reading! :D
    March 19th, 2011 at 12:11am