I don't have much time to leave a super long comment about how awesome you are, but I'd just like to say that you're amazing :D And holy sushi you update fast. I haven't had time to check my subscriptions in a while and when I did, It Started With a Bet had already ended and this story is 8 chapters in?
I love how this story is so fun :D It really makes it different from It Started With a Bet but it keeps all the characters we love. I have no idea why, but I really want the mystery girl to be Jessica.
Mended.heart NOOO! Dx How dare you be first! lol, kidding, kidding!
What?! >:D Mwahaha, this girl is evil! Where's he gonna get a green fortune cookie????? xD I also have the sneaking suspicione (Oh, wow, I can't spell supsiucuion... supsicienonnfrijebnfch... >.<) that the mystery girl is Jessica, no? Okay then, is it Emma? Hmm..... guesses guesses :]
i personally think that girl has a mind a lot like mine because that sounded so much like something i would do...and its very devious he is gonna have a heck of a time figuring out how to mange it. and i really hope the little "girl stuff" scene was Emma saying she liked Corey and wanted Jessica's help =D but about half way through this chapter i am beginning to think that the mystery girl might be Jess. as odd as that seems. she could have lied about how she got the note and really was reading something she wrote. not sure its just a theory. and as for the new team...it would need a really awesome thing to bring it to life...who knows maybe there will be a Team Corey or something like that
ooooooooooooh soooo devious!! inside a fortune cookie?!?!?! that will be legit. idk how that will be managed!! hmmm. Im excited for the party chapter coming up and i wonder what the phone call was about with Jessica??? SUSPICIOUS!!! Can't wait to see what happens with the next post-it adventure!
So, I was halfway through this story before I realized two things: 1.) it was written by you, and 2.) it was a sequel. Yes, I'm pretty unobservant. xDDD
Anyway, WOW! This story is amazing. I love your characters (for some reason, I like Janice a lot o-o), and all the comedic shizz in it. I swear, I was laughing the entire time I was reading this. I hope you're happy, 'cos my entire family thinks I'm a freak now for the stupid grin your story put on my face. Hahaha. I haven't read "It Started With A Bet", but guess what I'm going to do right now? Haha.
My (self described) gorgeous, smart, and highly modest cousin would like to inform you that it's "octupi" ;P
My other cousin (who is modest enough not to describe herself as gorgeous or smart) days your comment made her day.
Anyway, glad you enjoyed it! Haha. Your nose was up against the screen? Lol!
Someone getting hung from a tree? Oh my...that's kinda...depressing. Anyway, I'm glad Team Spike has totally infiltrated your life. MUAHAHAHAHAHA!!! Lol. Anyway, I'd love to see people with the tshirt some day :)
no ideas for a new team yet...but this chapter was nice! darn jealousy!!! It ruins everyone, but trevor and haley were really cute in this one :D haha i actually like "awwwed" out loud when reading it and my brother probably thought i was a weirdo. soo today in my science class i was randomly doodling on my notebook paper because i was soo bored and i ended up drawing the Team Spike logo haha my friend was looking at it from a distance and was like "is that someone getting hung from a tree?" and i just busted up laughing and was like "no its a girl swinging on one! See?!" then she said it was nice after looking at it up close that is hahaha. that was awesome. well im curious about this PA system chapter coming....and now there is a party coming up! whoop! whoop! i see that chapter coming with a BANG!! still loving it (: Update soon :D
i thought it was a good chapter and it makes sense to add some the first story in just in case. and i seriously cant wait for the PA system announcement. i think a we could make a new team along side the team spike :D
I can't wait to see how mystery girl manages to get it over the pa system. And I think the wonder couple will totally work it out faster then the speed of light. I think it pretty funny that he made Haley feel jealous. I can't wait to see what happens next. I really hope that the mystery girl is Emmaleigh that would be so cute :)
Oh man over the PA system!! INTERESTING!!! that sounds crazy :D i like it!!! i saw your team spike t-shirt design and i love it! Now i just need to find time to actually make it if i decide to take that route which i think will be a lot cooler cuz then if people comment i can say "oh, yea i made it and got the idea from this online story i read which was really good!!" haha oh poor haley feeling jealous. such an ugly color, indeed! I wonder what got trevor all worked up. hmmmm i see something brewing soon. hope you can update fast! :)