Tell Me I'm A Bad Man - Comments

Dear readers,
i justb got myself grounded for being obnoxious. that word means nothing to me now, i've heard it used way too many times lately.'
so i'm not allowed online for the next two weeks. naturally, there will be no updates. i'll prepare some, though.
i shall return on the 19th.
talk to you then,
jules, the conductor.

i like it write more soon

circolo interno di vita e morte

or ICOLAD

'Inner circle of life and death'

If I just totally fucked up a phrase in a different language, please correct me, and let me know if I've spelled something dirty or something.

hahaha.

i really like the name lunacy fringe for the cult's name (:

**AUTHOR'S NOTE. PLEASE READ.**

okay, i've told everyone a million times about how i need a cult name for the rival cult. so, ince i had all of one response, i wrote up a journal about it. i got a few hits, but i want the name to come from one of my readers. so, anyone from the journal who reads this, please just read and comment. then you'll be in the running. and readers, my story thing says there are 54 readers, but virtually no one has come up with a name.

so, all readers please comment when you read. i like to know who i'm writing for. and readers, please throw a few suggestions for the name! i don't care if you think your idea is stupid, i think a lot of my ideas are stupid, and they turn out good.

here's the suggestions so far...
Sakura : Lunacy Fringe
JonnySaysRawR!_121 : The White Parade
I_luv_Emos : The Ghost of You
White Eyes : The City of Evil
pyros_anonymous : Muppets From Hell
Rebels United
Charlies Angel : The Revenge
a loser with style : The Venin
Cirque Du Venin

if i used the username, that means i don't recognize you from commenting on my story. so i will really only use names from readers. you don't have to be a character, just a reader.

please help me out here.
-jules aka The Captain

p.s. see? i got a funky title too!

wow. that's cool.^
plus i like the music on your myspace.
yeah, use it, you made the layout.
and i don't know how to setup the story layout, so if anyone could tell me, that'd be good.
once i figure that out, i'll get the link for the background.
thanx!!!

Okay, so, hi :) It's me again, and I'd just like to say that this story inspired me so much that I stayed up late(r) last night and made a myspace/anything else you'd like to use layout on photoshop concerning this story. To see what it might look like on a layout click ] here and for just the background here.
Do I have permission to use this layout based on this story ?

If so, thanks, and if you want the myspace layout code lemme know :]

THE CITY OF EVIL, I don't know, but I love this story and it's originality. More when ya can.

^ aww, thank you!!!!
i'll write more ASAP, but right now i have to work on a rough draft for a 5 page research paper that i just started and it's due tomorrow.
but i'll fit in story time soon.

This story is absolutely incredible. It's deifinitely the most original thing I've read in a while. You have an amazing talent for writing, and I look forward to reading more of this story.

Excellent job :)

don't spam my page or the story will get deleted. by the moderators.
or me. if you spam my page, i'm deleting this story.
THIS GOES FOR ALL OF YOU.

sakura: some people spell it 'hoe' some spell it 'ho.' either way, that's what you are.

adele: i don't love him, and you spelled it wrong. he spells it 'charley'. not sure why. don't care why either.

teeheehee this is adele on sakura's mibba at sakura's house spaming ur page!!!
i don't know what the cult should be... i'm not smart enough to think of a good one...
spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam!!!!

p.s. u love charlie and u know it!!!!!

teeheehee this is adele on sakura's mibba at sakura's house spaming ur page!!!
i don't know what the cult should be... i'm not smart enough to think of a good one...
spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam!!!!

p.s. u love charlie and u know it!!!!!

teeheehee this is adele on sakura's mibba at sakura's house spaming ur page!!!
i don't know what the cult should be... i'm not smart enough to think of a good one...
spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam!!!!

p.s. u love charlie and u know it!!!!!

teeheehee this is adele on sakura's mibba at sakura's house spaming ur page!!!
i don't know what the cult should be... i'm not smart enough to think of a good one...
spam spam spam spam spam spam spam spam!!!!

p.s. u love charlie and u know it!!!!!

I am not a story ho! You can't even spell ho right you dumbshit! And just for that, I shall spam your comments page!!!!

I am not a story ho! You can't even spell ho right you dumbshit! And just for that, I shall spam your comments page!!!!

I am not a story ho! You can't even spell ho right you dumbshit! And just for that, I shall spam your comments page!!!!

I am not a story ho! You can't even spell ho right you dumbshit! And just for that, I shall spam your comments page!!!!

Friends, Readers, Citizens of the Mibba community,
as you know, there is going to be another cult in the story. but right now, it still doesn't have a name. i mentioned this before, but i need my readers to come up with a name for it.

it could be anything, whatever comes to mind.
please post suggestions on this thread.

the only entry so far:
Lunacy Fringe (from Sakura. the real one, not the story character)

luv ya!
jules