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amaxing :) with a 'x' not a 'z' bc it was that good

I really love this!!! Another amazing story :D
Please post more as soon as possible.

Stay Awesome :D

i really liked the skylight part lmfao. whos blood will he get??

more?

thank you for adding another chapter ^.^ i liked the part where the teacher was throwing stuff at him lol and i hope he can control the other elements :)

more plz????????

Loved it, as always ^.^ keep going plz

Chapter 1
Loved it :) better plot then new lol.

wow. i like that youve carried on with pheobe's story line but then youve branced off and created another character and have put him in the same world but with his own story. it adds some depth to the stories.
cant wait for more :)

I like it and can not wait for more.

its got me hooked already :) Buttttttttttttttt.... I love it already too >:D !! Bahahahahaha, love your writing ! keep going !

It's interesting... to be honest I'm not sure if I like it or not yet... I think I will have to read more and get a feel for it more before making that kind of judgement. Still love the way you write though!