thank you for adding another chapter ^.^ i liked the part where the teacher was throwing stuff at him lol and i hope he can control the other elements :)
wow. i like that youve carried on with pheobe's story line but then youve branced off and created another character and have put him in the same world but with his own story. it adds some depth to the stories. cant wait for more :)
It's interesting... to be honest I'm not sure if I like it or not yet... I think I will have to read more and get a feel for it more before making that kind of judgement. Still love the way you write though!