Seeking Samuel - Comments

@ animal soup
dude i'm so glad! this is my first time logging into this site in YEARS literally now and I've been editing and rewriting all my shit too. hope everything is good with u!!

@ boyking
<3 currently editing this and coming back to read comments. made my day :]

YES

Gosh, your writing is truly amazing. I absolutely adore this.

Holy cow. This story is amazing. I don't think I've ever fallen in love with anything on this site this quickly. Your writing is absolutely fantastic. The characters are so well developed, without having to give a huge backstory. Also, I like when Sam talks about something that happened in the past that lead to the current situation and how it transitions back into the present. It's so fluid. This story is simply stunning :)

MY GOD MY GRAMMAR
******so forgive me if this comment gives you whiplash
dear god i need to proof read my comments

you changed the little info thing that i dont remember what its called thing and the summary but i like it cause it correlates (not sure if thats the correct word but im 99.9% sure it is) with the title and that always is cool to me i dont know why but i haven't read yet but i will now so forgive if this is comment gives you whiplash
now i have to ask is it birmingham england or birmingham alabama yeah yup. i dont think i like paul and its not because of his name (i dont like the name paul) but paul is like annoying and pushy and my opinions on him could change but god paul
so i like riley green eyes are just so wonderful and nice
i think thats it
oh i also like the picture the guys teeth are soooo straight and i have braces so my teeth are going to be like super straight and oh my god that is so irrelevant
but yeah this was a lovely update

Aw, Sam. I just wanna give him a big hug after that weekend he had. At least he has his job/Riley to look forward to now. Definitely loving this so far, and your writing is superb. I all the unique imagery really brings Sam's character and the story to life. Can't wait to read more! <3

Ugh, I suck so hard. ):
You already know how much I love this.
and how much I adore Sam,
and how hard I'm gonna murder Paul if he doesn't back the fuck off.
and just fucking everything about this story.

and I really really want you to update this soon.

and I'm sorry for sucking so hard at commenting. D:
<3

erm wow this was wonderful
i liked the ending

Once again, I'm floored by your writing, it's absolutely beautiful. I love how detached Sam is socially yet at the same time he's so mentally aware of everything going on (Did that make any sense? I'm not quite sure how else to phrase it.) I absolutely loved the ending to this chapter too, how he reached a breaking point. Although now I really cannot wait for your next update.
Anyway, before I write you a novel: this was an amazing chapter to an amazing story and your writing makes me green with envy.

I don't comment on any story of this site, at all, but I felt compelled to tell you this story is absolutely fantastic. Your characterisation is damn near flawless, and I love how mature your protagonist is portrayed, yet there's still this resonate adolescence about him. Amazing story :D

im in love with this
amazing writing♥

WHAT THE SHIT I HAVEN'T COMMENTED YET. -.-
oh my god I'm so sorry. fucking Harry Potter keeping
me completely distracted and horrible friend like.

Anyway. I know you already know how much I adore this story. Sam is just so heartbreaking
and great all at the same time and I just don't know what to do with him. And then Paul. Fucking
Paul. I honestly cannot wait for that certain someone to come and save the day, because so help
me god I am going to crawl into this story and just beat the ever loving shit out of him if it doesn't
happen soon.

And the thing with his dad. Obviously I have no idea what that's like, since I'm lucky enough to not
have divorced parents, but just the way Sam handled it just. Fuck. I don't even know. It's SO good.
And then his mom. <3 ugh. I love Sam so much

And I love this so much, please update soon <3
sorry again for taking so long to comment. -.-

i am in love wit this story

I really love your story , cant wait till you write the next chapter :D

Sorry it's taken me so long to comment ):
I feel bad. D:

But, shit I love this.
I love how I can't completely figure out Sam yet.
I really really like that you're slowly letting us all see who
he really is. It's a nice change of pace. Almost like he's even
guarded with his thoughts, since clearly he's a little more than fucked up.
Especially with people, but it's like he's not ridiculously 'Sam' (sorry, I can't think of a better description, baha) with everyone, and then on the inside he's just a big ball of talkative and all knowing or whatever. You didn't let his thoughts contradict how he actually acts, and jesus christ I love you <33 (I really hope that made sense, I feel like I babbled. lmfao)
This seriously broke my heart, like, guh. And then Riley!! <33
Good god, I can't even begin to tell you how excited I am to see Riley fix things. :3

Like, the entire beginning of this chapter was just. Perfect.
We got to see a little bit of the source of why Sam is just. Sam.
And, might I add, lmfao, I loved the Toy Story bit. :3
I have this little Lego Buzz keychain on my keys and I always take it out during class and play with it. Ahahaha. But it was cute how like in a way Sam's always been a loner but he's able to identify and feel comfort from these fictional characters. Or, just fictional characters in general since he likes to read. I might be able to identify with that a little too easily. Baha.

And then, holy FUCK, that whole puzzle analogy thing.
Like, fucking perfect.
Is it kind of sad that like, the way Sam thinks (or at least the way you describe him) reminds me of myself in SO many ways? Completely not in the way that he's so clearly fucked up, but just the way he thinks about everything. Like, I read that puzzle piece thing and I was like "D: FUCKING HELL." because it's not that we don't fit in because we're different. We're just a little more rough around the edges. Y'know? I hope that makes sense because now I just think I'm getting far too sentimental, lmfao. But seriously, I loved it.

Awwww. Hahaha, poor Sam. Freaking the fuck out when Dianna made him watch porn. (I loved that she was upset about making him upset, too. bestfriends feeling bad for doing things, ftw. nice to know it's out there somewhere. -.-) I really do love Sam, haha. I love how he can't be selfish about the idea of watching it, it's just like one of those things that's supposed to be personal and between the two people, not something to be showcased for a bunch of horny pervs. I think it really showed that Sam's a really selfless person, not to mention a little off just because he freaked out about it. Unless he's just hardcore caring about everything and it makes him freak out. Maybe? Who knows, I'm sure you'll let us find out by the time this is over. :3 Mm. Ohh, but I just can't decide what I think is wrong with Sam. Because obviously something is, right? I dunno, maybe I'm reading too far into things but good god I want to know so bad D: Please tell me he doesn't have some terminal disease that's going to make me BAWL MY FUCKING EYES OUT at one point in this. Haha. Please. (: Oh shit, and then Paul comes in and turns into a pro creeper. Like, any kind of crazy I was thinking at the end of the second chapter is gone. I'm not sure I like him at all anymore, because I have a feeling the sex thing was a lot of pressure on his part and Sam just wasn't ready for that and now he's even more fucked up than before. :/ Does Bryson know? Have I asked this question already? No idea, even though Bryson doesn't seem like the "I'll protect the fuck out of you" kind of brother, but still. Maybe he'll be the kind of emotional support Sam really seems to need right now. Even though I'm sure Riley will be pro at that. :33

Oh oh oh, and I don't know if you've read this story, but Mr. Bell reminds me of Frank's teacher in Anorex-a-Gogo. Only, extremely distantly because 1) Sam isn't that fucked up, and 2) Mr. Bell isn't like, all excited about being Sam's friend. Haha. Just him trying to care when caring isn't really helpful at all reminded me of it, and I thought I should let you know :3 (and sorry for the babbling, aha. I think I'm in a babble mood at the moment D:)

Speaking of, RILEY BISHOP.
Gah, he was just there for a second and I was just so happy to see him and just gaaah, it was so cute. I can see all the things you told me about him in just that small exchange, and it makes me really excited to see where he's going to go in this and how he's going to affect Sam. Like, good god I can't wait. <33

Okay, wow, I think this got super wordy due to the babbling D:
but I hope you enjoyed it nonetheless.
And please please please, I'm dying for more soon. <3333
Love for Lisa! :D

I honestly can't even fathom how much I'm completely in love with this. It's just so fucking original, I don't even know what to do with myself. I think I like it because for some reason I can see everything happening, the imagery I get is ridiculous. “No problem!” The boy replied easily, tossing his head to the right a little, flicking hair off of his forehead. I watched as he hitched his bag up higher on his shoulder blade—the blue fabric of his shirt rumpling a little with the movement. His hand—larger than mine, which was kind-of surprising—spring up in one of those awkwardly-fast half-waves, before he turned around and continued down the hallway. Like that bit, I loved it, and I could see it. I keep rereading chapters, I don't know, I'm intrigued and interested and I can't wait for the next chapter and you're brilliant.

I'm sorry, I'm in awe. Can't leave a decent comment for the second chapter. Unable to form words. New favourite story. Can't wait for the next chapter. Yeah.

Oh my god I had no idea you started another story. This is amazing, I've only read the first chapter but I had to leave a quick comment. It's so interesting, and for an introduction to a new story I think you did a really great job. I'm already completely in love with the main character, and you've managed to do that in one chapter. I mean holy shit, I could go on and on (and on).

I'd looked at that carpet millions of times before, the pattern and random stains almost burned into my memory. But somehow, everything seemed different somehow. Like something had shifted--but I didn't know what. For some reason, I loved that. The whole 'shift' bit.