And finally, Little Red sees.... This will be an abnormally shot comment. And that scares me... But hey, what can ya' do? I. Love. Gray. There. <3...to infinity!
now you see, i would have been like, why yes, yes you should stay lol and YAY! update! :D and yessss she finally ran away...i wonder if her mom will care
Yay. Those last two chapters made me happy...though I know there will be a downside. And I'm all for a sequel. That way you don't have a freakishly long story. But whatever you want. xD
The sad thing is... Ells dressing up as a ninja to run away? I would do that. xD And The Corruptor! I laughed SO hard! xDxD Puck calling her Little Rebel reminded me of Little Red Riding Hood. Thought you should know. Admit it, your life is all the better knowing that little tid bit. =P At least ONE of us could update tonight... >.< That was sooo awesome. xD <3... to infinity. =3
That was really awesome, considering the first chapter of DLF was basically about Dot running away, so I laughed my ass of, and gasped, and choked on my french vanilla all at the same time. xD And my god, is Pipper or whatever awesome. xD And Gray... He has an epic movie preferance! He is just so damn adorable. =3 And Puck... The Corruptor. The very sexy Corruptor... He is awesome. <3 So... yeah, I lovelovelove this, and if you just sort of ended that last chapter as an end to the story, with an opening for a sequel, so if you want to do that, you should do it NOW. =D I know I would read it. =P <3... to infinity...AND BEYOND! (Yay for dorkiness! =D)
You have to keep writting. You have a solid character with Ellie and I think this story has a lot more to give. Its up to you wether you go into a sequel but I don't think you really need to. If you go into a sequel I think you need to 'end' this one and then leave some a time gap for the next one. If that makes any sense lol