When an angel falls - Comments

that was the most epic ending i've read in a while--im still obsessing over it! XD ah, how sweet...i wish love were like that in real life, but of course that's not true--and even if it were, i wouldn't happen to me....
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AnYwAyS, great job. i loved it--sad that it had to end though, but then again--dont all things end eventually? please keep writing, i'll read ANYTHING, for real. you've done a great job with this story, im curious as to what else you'll write...
write on! ~JynxRaven (Wings of Hope/Shadow Guardian)

Yes. I love cliffhangers. I feel it is better to give the reader a little imagination for the ending. So that its free to think what you want. Maybe they get married and have kids. Maybe she says no to the marriage. It's whatever you can think of. :3

0.0 cliffhanger ending.

Yay :D another pic. Thanks and if you or anyone else have request or ideas for me just say so. :3

Aww! That's such a sweet ending!!! Dude, I'm glad u wrote this story!! I hope ur proud of it, cuz i really enjoyed readin' it! U put a lotta effort into tha story, n i give it ***** stars! I'll miss those characters lol
P.S
i mite do a scene of Kaden n Kenji fighting...^^

awesome story :) i love angels/demons/fallen angels etc....soooo epic. really good story....i cant wait for the next part...subscribing :) write on! ~JynxRaven (Wings of Hope/Shadow Guardian)

Dx sorry, I am used to writing like that because of Rp (roleplaying) I'll try to get out of the habbit.

Ps it's good and I'm to damn lazy to go on your sight right now...
I'm a little transfixed on writeing four stories at once (not a smart idea)
and you can read my stories...
But what ever you do never read my slash...
I warn you..
Unless you like gay guys...
(laughs)

-quit doing this-
and don't put *this*
when they sigh or something...
Say he/she sighed.
And you don't have to do -this to have it third person-
readers catch on...

Oh yeah...
I claim mr. Ducky..
Tehe.

dude, i gotta hand it to ya(again) I asked for a romantic story, n i got one! I love how u approached the story in a different aspect!! N how he told her he loves her is so..Original! looking forward to the next chapter

Thank you. I tried to make it more than just saying "I Love You" Because the words are too overused and never meant from the heart these days.

Ok wow love chapter seven. The way he tells her he loves her by showing her what her own body is telling her.

There is emotion in every word of every chapter in my stories. There will always be a message when I write. Art is one thing if it's beautiful, but when it can teach you then it is glorious. It humbles me to know that my writing has taught you something. Thank you for all of your positive feedback. I will have the next chapter up for all of you as soon as I can.

Ok i am now going to kick your butt! lol jk But i have to say you did make me cry and knowing you, i bet you put yourself in his shoes when you wrote his prayer. I have been moved to tears by many people in my time, but this time it stays with me. I dont know if you meant to leave the message in your story but i got one out of it. Keep up the great work kiddo <3

P.S. I commented on the other site, tuu! N wen exactly is the new unknown dude gonna appear in the story? i look forward tu it cuz on the character tab he looked ashum!

I just finished reading ch. 5, n wow dude i gotta say it was really moving... especially when Kenji was praying. The words u used were strong, it was like i was feeling sad while Kenji was feeling sad, n it was kewl like that. AND, my other fav. part was when his father was all like "For Gods sake boy don't fail any classes in school!" Haha, jus imagining that made me laugh. O, n ANOTHER thing, u finally wrote a sweet moment between Amy n Kenji! YAAY! I've been looking forward to a sweet scene forEVER!! I had an "Awww <3!!" moment when Kenji realized that he might be in love with Amy, SO SWEET!!!

Copy and paste this link to see the website I created for the story.

http://www.wix.com/kenjifuuma/when-an-angel-falls

Lol don't worry Elena all shall be revealed soon to come in later chapters. muwahahahahaha >:D

Hay! OMG i LOOVVEE The story so far! I can't wait till the next part. N i agree with the rubber ducky part, h i l a r i o u s! haha, i wonder when Kenji is going to take notice of Amy n fall for her, and I'm also curious about his soon-to-be rival. O, n on the 4th part it's cool how u incorporated religion into the story, thumbs up!

Thanks sis~