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  • beautiful freaks;

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    kasjerkndghg; I hate you for having a cliffhanger...well it kinda is lol.
    that was a pretty fast update though :D
    anyways; I loved the chapter, as always, and I can't wait for more!
    September 12th, 2011 at 01:07am
  • hollywood and vine;

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    (legasp!) Somebody knows about the world!? And the guy said "version" so that leads me to believe that there are others. If that's true I can't wait to see where that idea takes this story. If not, it was a good thought was it not? ;] Other than that, I'm still hooked and I can't wait to see what happens during the next update.
    Oh! And congrats on your 10 subs! :D I'm glad to be one of them.
    September 5th, 2011 at 04:41am
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    Somebody needs to explain why the world is being put back in motion as if by some magical way. lol.
    This is seriously one of the most original ideas I've ever seen for a fan fiction and I want to read more. ^_^
    Update soon, dear!
    September 3rd, 2011 at 07:31pm
  • Matt Flyzik

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    yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay.
    omfg, i got so excited when i saw this was updated. (:
    ahahah, i loved it, like always!
    September 3rd, 2011 at 02:22am
  • beautiful freaks;

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    So that was a pretty interesting chapter! and they're in Seattle :D lol.
    loved the chapter and update soon (:
    August 28th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    The chapter was really good! I'm curious to why she felt uneasy and what is going on. I can't wait for more :)
    August 28th, 2011 at 01:35pm
  • beautiful freaks;

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    Okay, it's official, I am in love with this story!
    I think you should update soon & I'm gonna subscribe :D
    August 5th, 2011 at 02:38am
  • Matt Flyzik

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    Hooray! You updated! I'm so happy!
    And I LOVED every syllable of it! :)
    Honestly, I love this story with all my heart<3
    June 2nd, 2011 at 05:48am
  • Untold Story

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    I loved the update! The end made me smile, it was really cute(:

    Another one soon?
    May 31st, 2011 at 07:57pm
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    Great update! :) the end was cute!
    May 30th, 2011 at 03:12am
  • Untold Story

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    I really liked how she was more concerned that he was, haha. You;d think he would be, but I guess not. As for suggestions......Paris, France.merely because it's the city of romance. I believe.....
    Anyway, I loved the update. I did laugh at some parts, but I'm glad they can finally be together wihtout the hassle. Update soon? :)
    May 5th, 2011 at 01:19am
  • Matt Flyzik

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    yayayayayaayayayay!
    This one was really exviting! I loved it! I honestly don't know how this doesn't have more subscribers!
    Gosh, I'm addicted!
    May 1st, 2011 at 05:12pm
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    & the world is officially stopped! Haha I liked the chapter! I really like this story idea, I think it's really creative. Good job :)
    May 1st, 2011 at 02:41pm
  • Untold Story

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    How in the world does this not get more readers and commenters?
    Seriously people have no taste...gosh :P
    Anyway, I liked the chapter and how she felt about the constant 'pressure' or 'stress' from the papparazzi? and I loved the chapter, more than liked. At least they're alone now.. and no one is bugging the crap out of them. Best chapter yet, I want to keep reading to find out what happens next
    April 20th, 2011 at 11:17pm
  • Matt Flyzik

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    Yayayayayayayayayayayayayayaayayayayayayay, you updateddd!
    Andd....
    I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVED it! :D Seriously, best chapter BY FAR! haha, idkidkidkkk.
    lol, anywayss. ;kldsjfs;ldkjf. loved it (:
    April 17th, 2011 at 11:20pm
  • Matt Flyzik

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    Ohhhh my gosh!
    Honestly, Jenna, you have absolutely no idea how much I am in love with this story! Seriously, I wait and wait for it all week!
    Nick is so amazing in it, and you make me seem so nice and amazing when i'm really not at all. And him asking about christmas and such was just so adorable, and I'm so in love with thi sstory, and hnnnnnnnggg.

    Gosh, my family seems to weird in this story! It's almost like real life! I swear! ahah,

    I LOVED IT!
    April 2nd, 2011 at 08:35pm
  • livelifetolove

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    Nick is just absolutely adorable in this story. He's so sweet, and the fact he was nervous to ask her to come to Christmas with him was cute.

    I like that you're having them go slow. It makes the whole thing more believable.

    Her family seems very dysfunctional. I wonder if that has anything to do with the world....Is the world their only gift? Or are there others?

    I was also wondering what Rachel meant when she said, 'you can't hide something like that from your parents'? It makes me suspicious....What are her parents really like? We got introduced to them a little bit in the beginning, but it goes back to the whole dysfunctional thing.

    I'll just have to see how the story goes. I'm excited.

    <3'd it!
    March 29th, 2011 at 09:46am
  • Untold Story

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    Alright, I loved the update and hope you will update soon. Yeah, I think I'm eager to get to read the stopping the world part just as you are to write it. And, I noticed the taking things slow thing which I'm glad they are because most couples dont as you pointed out. I'm glad that he asked her for Christmas break and that was sort of sad how her family doesn't really celebrate Christmas, but good because she went and kissed Nick over New Years:D
    Yeah..update soon?
    March 27th, 2011 at 06:59am
  • Untold Story

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    [blue]Alright, so first I apologize for not commenting sooner. I've been on and off and haven't had the time. IHowever, I have the time now and obviously read the update. I loved the update, and yeah. Wow, Nick knew more than Marley thought..I wonder if her parents will ever find out if she told. Maybe when the stopping the world part comes, but who knows? And it wasn't boring, I did enjoy reading it:) Update soon? [/blue]
    March 19th, 2011 at 03:36am
  • livelifetolove

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    EEK! SHE TOLD HIM! OMG!
    I don't want to even know what her parents are going to say when they find out...Not that they'll find out anytime soon, but still!
    Loved it!
    March 14th, 2011 at 05:33am