Well this is gaining much intrigue. Cannot wait for the rest.
January 21st, 2011 at 09:24am
Coffee and Cigarettes - Comments
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This is excellent!January 21st, 2011 at 03:39am
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-Sobs- No Taryn! Don't go!!! And deffinitly don't take David! I see 'bad idea' written all over this, I can't wait for more. I love David so much. I wish kids these days were like him.January 20th, 2011 at 09:42am
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! DOOOO NOOTTTT SSSSSSTTTTTTTTTOOOOOOOOOOOOOPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!January 18th, 2011 at 02:00pm
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i love this..heck, i love all of your stories!
only comment would be to change the layout..it's hard to read...i had to highlight the pageJanuary 17th, 2011 at 11:33pm -
this is quite amazing.
update soon, yeah?January 17th, 2011 at 04:02am -
This was just wonderful.
<3January 16th, 2011 at 08:20pm -
oh my god this was absolutely fucking adorable. it really like fucking touched my heart, in a totally cheesy way. ;3 and just david's views and the way this all happened was just the sweetest and most innocent thing ever and i really don't think you could have captured the prompt any better if you fucking tried, okay. this was so great and just god, I can't wait for the other 99 chapters. XD I got 99 chapters, but a ~*~het~*~ ain't one. anyway idk, I just hope that even though it mentions that it was all a "mistake," that it really, truly works out for them in the end.
BRB SUBSCRIBING. hope this comment made sense lol ily.January 16th, 2011 at 07:05am -
Well! What a start?! That was so intriguing,I am waiting at the edge of my seat for the rest! I cannot wait to see where you go with the rest of this! Good luck!January 15th, 2011 at 11:59pm
