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  • If.You.Be.My.Star.

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    I loved it(:
    October 18th, 2011 at 04:12am
  • Bamboo33010

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    This is a great story!!!!! Very well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    July 29th, 2011 at 04:26am
  • SHYLA01

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    awww
    Great times were had :)
    A lovely end :)
    June 3rd, 2011 at 02:00pm
  • SHYLA01

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    3 to go!!
    May 25th, 2011 at 10:06am
  • SHYLA01

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    ba ba baaaaaa !
    Great update!
    May 12th, 2011 at 07:50am
  • SHYLA01

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    Oh NO! an angry vampire!
    May 6th, 2011 at 04:58pm
  • SHYLA01

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    OK awww. This is so cute,and lovely, and I wish I had something like that! ahhh so great!
    May 1st, 2011 at 04:48pm
  • SHYLA01

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    I KNEW IT!
    I know she's hurting but when she sees him. It'll get better!
    April 27th, 2011 at 09:20am
  • webster4409

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    Update!
    April 26th, 2011 at 03:40am
  • SHYLA01

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    It's Paul! It's paul! It has to be him.... Bet you. If I'm wrong ... well I can't be :( it has to be lol I'm such a sap.
    Great update.
    April 19th, 2011 at 09:39am
  • SHYLA01

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    This is such a great story. Paul is the one for her though. You never know, Jasper could be unintentionally putting loving emotions in her, or making them more prominate because when she's with Paul and I mean with her walls down she doesn't think of him, and she never has her wall fully down with Jasper.
    Can't wait for more!
    April 18th, 2011 at 07:36pm
  • Laur-Farrah

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    Do love this. :)
    Keep up the good work!
    April 12th, 2011 at 06:16pm
  • Art_Flavor

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    Wow.
    What is Jasper going to do?
    Update Soon
    April 10th, 2011 at 09:14pm
  • glamorously

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    omg, best chapter so far.
    April 10th, 2011 at 09:06pm
  • Limited-Edition

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    I don't want to give you a grammer lesson and I'm not going to, but I did notice you used a lot of -- (dashes), they usually substitute for the semi-coln ;. And in the form you're using them in, you have a few unnecessary ones in your updated chapter. So try not use dashes to set apart material when commas would do the trick for you.

    Oh, and this '?!' isn't correct, even though you might see a lot of people do it. Try and find other ways to emphasize what you want to say. Other than that, keep up the imagination. (ha, that sounded lame)

    {: peace
    April 7th, 2011 at 12:18am
  • Limited-Edition

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    I'm not huge on twilight but I stumbled onto your story on impluse and I am quite suprised at myself, liking your this twific that is. Honestly, you right pretty well and I think you deserve more comments than just 8 not including myself. I hate silent readers, eh, but what can you do. Though, I myself don't fall into the twi hype, I fail not to like I Never Meant To Start A War. Good Job, I look forward to reading more{:
    April 4th, 2011 at 05:25am
  • Annie_Weasley

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    Amazing story! Keep writing please? :D
    March 28th, 2011 at 07:03pm
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    Who is she going to choose?
    I hope it is Paul and I hope tells Jasper soon.
    Anyway, I loved this update.
    Update Soon
    March 25th, 2011 at 02:04am
  • wolfprincess1995

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    I am enjoying this! update soon please
    March 10th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • nicolecullen

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    Loved your story :D please update soon
    February 28th, 2011 at 01:34am
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