Lost in the Sun - Comments

I decided to read this because the title drew me in, ahah. :) By the summary, it seems like a good, interesting topic. :D Even though it seems kinda cliche, it's okay, because I love cliche stories. Haha. ;)

You could go on boat rides, she could even drive the boat occasionally.
I think the 'she' is supposed to be 'you'? :o

I AM GOING TO BE LIKE LULA AND HAVE 52 CATS. I love kittehs. Haha. Completely irrelevant.

I love the name Aidan! As you could tell from my story, aha. :)

I LOVED CHAPTER 3. It was so cute.

Awwww. Chapter four was so sad. I felt so bad for Lula and Aidan was such a dick to her. :(

Absolutely fantastic. Well written and I really enjoyed it.

....this is really really good. i would hope that if you can youll try a sequel

this is very good, i love it and im looking forward to more

I'm actually rather liking this.
I want to know what happens in the last chapter.
Do you think you could do me a favour and message me when it's up?
That would be awesome :)
This is great, by the way.

Lol, this story starts the day after what would be my 15th birthday.
Okay, so I got distracted.
I'm actually going to read this now :D