Broken Wings - Comments

oooooh! I like this chapter! it's getting interesting :3
i'm a little confused, but I guess that's a good thing, cause it drives me even more crazy to read the next chapter!!
This chapter is so well written, you're so freakin talented! But, there's one thing :') I just have this thing where typos seem the funniest things in the world to me...and XD "there was a small park in his eyes" XD XD im sorry, I know it's meant to mean spark, and its not really that big of a deal, I just found that so funny XD a park in his eyes XD sorry I should shut up now.
Yay! I'm Frank Iero's long distance girlfriend! ^.^ Sorry I had to be there to drag him away from Max D:
And about the pictures, they're actually really intruiging...like, in some ways I don't believe them, but they mean something....idk, JUST HURRY UP AND UPDATE AGAIN YOU PERFECT WOMAN!

I love you ^.^ <3

what happened to this story? I just read all the chapters and of all your stories this quickly became the one I like most...

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So good.

YAY UPDATE! I love this story Mikey is so sweet to her :)

I love how calm Gerard was about it, someone had to be, I thought it wouldve been Mikey, but I guess not

“I have God on my side. And he has spoken to me and approved my methods,” the man said. <=== that goes against pretty much everything I believe in religiously so I think this guy should burn in hell.

I like the flashbacks they explain the story in a way and why Max is the way she is now. So keep em they're interesting :)

loved the update cant wait for more, this story is quite interesting!

I really like the flashbacks. They let us know more about her personal experiences and really does add something awesome to the story. I was watching Doctor Who at the time you mentioned it, so I was like :D!

Yay another chapter :D
You've made me happy(:
And I do like the flashbacks. It lets us know why she is this was, while not just spilling it all out at once. Keeps it interesting, yeah?
I look forward to the next update :D

Great story darling! Very original and I can't wait to read more :D

OHH YAAAY!! MY COMMENT WENT ONTO A NEW PAGE
*does another crazy happy dance*

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UPDATE.

Oh yes....*does crazy happy dance*

YAY! SHE'S GETTING BETTER! She's finally starting to feel a little, which desptie everything, is a pretty good sign! But I can't believe she's on pills! D: My Frankie will get her off them...won't he?

Ahh...my Frankie >:]

No no, it's not really a problem with the flashbacks! I mean, it makes the whole thing a little more depressing each time, but that's the point, isn't it? I think it's great having them in there too - it gives us a feel of what it was like to be Max. Well, clearly not, but you know what I mean xD

Me gusta *insert me gusta face*

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THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR UPDATING LOZZA! I LOVE YOU FOR IT.

this is so great! Did you know how fucking scared I got at thee whole 'she has no pulse'-part? I was like o_______________________________________________o NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!
hehehe...

and i have to agree with Max... Mikey has got a nice voice :3 haha! that comment of hers made me smile ;)

And about the flashbacks: I really enjoy it! [okay. that feels so wrong, i mean like, i find it interesting to read about what happened to her at that place, not that i find it funny or something] Keep 'em coming! ;D

You know i love you, right? ;) xoxo

The imagery in this chapter was amazing :)

EEP! yaaaaay its back! aaaaah this story is everything: gripping, hilarious, interesting, demented, sad, etc etc etc. I LOVE IT!
i think max is finally starting to open up a bit to the guys. god the institution is like every nightmare ive had all combined into one. the insane guy scared the shit out of me!

SO happy you're writing this story again! It's sort of sick and twisted, but AMAZING!

"Interesting. I love stuff. It's so...so...stuff-like," I like that, I might start using that 'stuff-like' lol

how can you NOT laugh at the image of Frank giving Gerard a lap dance. I mean COME ON THAT'S SO FUNNY! I cracked up at the mental image, just imagine it really happening!

I like how we get a flashback of her days in the institution, that's some crazy shit. the guy who was really insane and stuff an how he was chained up, that terrified me as well as making me mad and wanna cry at the same time! That is some really messed up shit!

I love it though, can't wait for more! preferably soon, but take all the time you need. :)

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THERE IS HOPE!
THERE IS HOPE!
*sings* HAAAAALELUJAH!

YAYYAYAAYAYYAYAYYA THIS IS GOING TO BE SOO GOOD
IT'S ONLY ON LIKE CHAPTER 3 BUT BUT BUT AAAAH!!!! This is going to be another one of my favourites, I just know it xD

Chapter 4 - HERE WE COME! xD

*------* Is it possible to be in love with a story? If so, I'm high off my shit with loooove. n_n

BHUIPDHN VFNGI IFXDJKHFJÖDS - YOU UPDATED :') even tho i knew you would cus you said so this morning! XD

Really good chapter! :D I can't wait to read more of this story!!! :)<3

You.... should update. Because I dun wanna wait that long. I get anxious when I'm waiting for someone to update stories and then I get all fangirl-ish when someone does. :D

Oh dude. I don't know what to say.. Let's start with this: I am crying. Yup. It's true, haha! Seriously, this was so sad. And that place seems fucking scary! The first chapter got me to start crying 'cause of Frank, that he missed his 'real' sister and that. The second chapter kinda made me love Mikey even more, I'm sure he'll do EVERYTHING for her and hopefully she'll feel. I really hope she will! Please continue this soon!x

i love this story chapter 3 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

I has a question. Is Ray gonna show up in da story? or is it just Mikey, Gerard and Frank