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  • SpankMyFrank

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    I love. *-*
    January 23rd, 2011 at 12:00am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    holy shit that was crazy as hell!!!! I feel so bad for Frank, he's like what the fuck happened to my sister!

    that 'institution' needs to be fucking shut down that place is a fucking pit of torture!

    what is it with you and your characters not liking hugs? not that its a bad thing just wondering.

    words cant describe how fucking amazing this story is! i really cant wait for more, so please update soon!
    January 22nd, 2011 at 06:09pm
  • mauricewashere

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    AAAAH THIS STORY IS GONNA BE AMAZINGGG i can just tell!!! i mean it already amazing and really interesting. wtf did she do!!! why would anyone send their kid to a torture chamber!!! well i doubt they knew it was that bad but really what kind of a heartless bitch would send their own kid to an asylum? wtf! haha cant waait for the next update!
    January 22nd, 2011 at 05:40pm
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    Damn! She must have went through utter HELL in that place! I hope someone finds those muuthafuckas....and burns them....burn them to ashes D:<

    I loved it! I can't wait to see if Frank/Gerard/Mikey manage to get Max to feel. I hope they do *-*

    And now...I have to wait forever long for the next update T_T
    January 22nd, 2011 at 12:20pm
  • xlookalivesunshinex

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    NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!
    I MISSED FIRST COMMENT!!!!!!!!!!! D: D: D: D: D: D: D: D: >.<
    Oh well, at least it means its popular already ^-^

    OMG! :') :') I laughed so hard at the 'IQ of a cornflake' bit...I was just scrolling down and I saw it and I was like....isn't that....then I saw "Doesn't that look familar?" and after that it was just, well, literally ROFLMAO xD xD You should check out MY update for a couple of familiar things too ;)

    I love this story already! It has a lot of potential...It's sad already...not in a bad way, hell no, in an amazing way. you've got me captivated and its only the first chapter.

    but you're awesome like that.

    lemme guess....SQUISHIES!? :')
    January 18th, 2011 at 10:30pm
  • mauricewashere

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    This looks really interesting! Excited to see what happens! It's creepy.... I like it :)
    January 18th, 2011 at 04:37am
  • Cellophane Soldier

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    hmmm, interesting... kinda depressing... but cool :)

    what exactly was wrong with her?
    January 17th, 2011 at 10:25pm
  • SpankMyFrank

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    I likey.
    I agree, I'd yell the exact same things if my dad sent my sister to a mental hospital.
    January 17th, 2011 at 08:49pm
  • LittlexRedxDevil

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    hmm, one word to describe this story; original :D
    in that flashback, she's back in that asylum isn't she? O.o
    other than that, i love this so far :)
    January 17th, 2011 at 08:34pm