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  • Daydream Away;

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    Alex was probably wishing it was Brooke the whole time haha jk. Great chapter(:
    February 26th, 2011 at 09:53pm
  • ineedacatchyname

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    steeeeeeamy
    February 26th, 2011 at 09:41pm
  • ElyRae

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    Oh hot dayyyyyumm.

    Good job ;D
    February 26th, 2011 at 06:44pm
  • Jolie Rouge

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    i wanna read more!!!!
    February 26th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • Jolie Rouge

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    im random!!!! :)
    February 26th, 2011 at 05:02am
  • Jolie Rouge

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    ive got a lovely bunch of coconuts...
    February 26th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • Jolie Rouge

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    i dont know why i like it so much... but i do... people!!! please comment!!!!
    February 26th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • Jolie Rouge

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    people should comment...
    February 26th, 2011 at 05:01am
  • Jolie Rouge

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    i want to read more!!!
    February 26th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • LifeisFiction

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    Your story looks promising. I hope you can keep going. Pathos, logos and ethos. I can't help ya there sorry even I fail when it comes to that I mean to use a bit of each it'll have to bein a way that you can make it believable, yet not cheesy enough to not be BS. Sorry not a good enough explanation
    February 24th, 2011 at 04:04am
  • ElyRae

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    whoa whoa whoa.

    What just happened?!
    February 21st, 2011 at 10:27pm
  • ccostley317

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    oh my goshh!!! i love thiss!!! this story it getting intensee! :)
    February 21st, 2011 at 04:43pm
  • Miss Jordii.

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    AHHHMYYYBARRAKATTT!
    Loved this chapter!
    She is gonna break someones heart whether it be Alex or Max :(
    February 21st, 2011 at 12:07pm
  • flyleaf64

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    I really love this "]
    February 21st, 2011 at 05:58am
  • Zampirenerd

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    Loved it!
    But uh oh is she falling for max?
    *sigh* she is just gonna break his heart. :/
    Update soon!
    February 21st, 2011 at 01:30am
  • akanevampire19

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    love it!!! more updates pliiiiiiiis!!!!! :D
    February 20th, 2011 at 07:19pm
  • Jessii Tara;

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    I love the story you have to write more!!!!!!!!!!!!! please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    February 20th, 2011 at 06:45pm
  • Bludgeoned.Brittany

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    how cud you end a chapter like that...not fair
    i loved it!
    i want more...no wait i need more...
    and ha silent library with atl was fucking amazing...i watched that episode on repeat haha
    February 20th, 2011 at 11:49am
  • GetOnYourKneesKid

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    Okay I am torn between Alex and Max but I kinda favor Max just a teeny bit more now haha
    February 20th, 2011 at 09:33am
  • CardboardWings

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    Love this story! I don't really have any suggestions to make it better, since so far its excellent (i honestly love the plot, and the way he saw her crying in the car was so like touching and romantic! I can't wait to see what her reaction will be when they meet each other in class the next time! Eek! Can't wait for your next update!
    February 19th, 2011 at 08:01pm
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