Stuck In This Gorgeous Nightmare - Comments

yay matt and Alaina kissed again xD and finally brian asked her xD
Update soon please

i bet matt tastes like root beer

i bet matt tastes like root beer

This is awesome! Love it xx

Good chapter I cant wait to see what happens and what happens to Matt and his girl.

Snap!! Brian was overreaccting a bit about the fortune cookie. Lozii is just careful of what she believes in. He gets all mad, then Lozii is upset. Matt gripes at her after Brian leaves. She looks for Brian and BOOM! Drunk idiot stumble her way...sounds awesome! Update soon please!

awww i hope they make up soon :D
loved the update more soon please

loved it! cant wait for more! i hope Lozii is ok and doesnt get hurt by the drunk creeps

Just to be super cheesy, I'm a "long time reader first time commenter" (it kind of hurt me to type that) but I felt the need to say that I love this story! Its awesome! Please update soon!

<333 LOOOVEE! I hope you up-date again soon! =D

I hope they make up soon, I bet Brian comes to the rescue thought so I know they will

loved it! cant wait for more! i hope Brian askes Lozii to be his girlfriend they are so cute together!

Awww, I enjoyed chapter 28. I can't wait until til Matt & Alaina get together. I hope you up-date again soon!

awww Matt is so cute :)
cant wait for the next update

you skipped from ch 27 to ch 29. just letting you know. awesome update (:

aww a blooming romance

hmm classic Jimmy! April fools jokes sound like something he would love!...even if it wasnt April! great chapter can't wait for more!

Sorry I got click happy and it posted twiceXD

Soo I only got to read part of Chapter 26 before I had to leave and now I have time to come back and I find another update.HELL YEAH!!!!XD
Anyway I was freaking out about Chapter 26 when I read it all the way through.For one their date was a cute-in-Alaina-and-Matt-kinda way lol.But I mainly freaked out when I read the bus was on fire.I swear my face was all like :O!
It seems that it is getting harder and harder for Alaina to keep up her walls to Matt.Which I love that it is but it's understandable why she is so guarded.Alaina did make a valid point when she brought up that things are going to change when Jason and Matt come back to work.I can't personally blame her for being guarded given that fact and she is just protecting herself,which is human nature.Though I really hope that things between Matt and Alaina start to really heat up soon;D
Chapter 27 was a good update in my opinion.Yeah Matt did kind of go overboard with Jimmy but as a reader I can see his frustration with him because he has been trying to win Alaina over and most likely doesn't want anything to go wrong.At least I wouldn't if I was him.
Although it wouldn't kill him to take a chill pill every now and then haha
I loved how Zacky pouted when Alaina said the fortune cookie wasn't for him but Lozii.Ahhhh just priceless XP
Wow Lozii really does take those fortune cookies seriously o.0.That was kind of weird but to each their own.I'm sure everyone does something another person finds weird.
Can't wait for the next update!!!!:D
P.S-My favorite part out of both chapters would have to be this-"Thanks, best friend!" She smiled widely, paying no attention to Brian who was sitting on the floor not looking impressed at all. "I'm gonna go open it in the bathroom."-That was just great:p
P.S.S-I really feel like I'm reading an actual published book here lately.Everything is so well put to together and I really appreciate how both of you don"t seem to forget things.Like the Berry brothers being mentioned is just one example.SO thanks a million to the both of you amazing writers:)

Soo I only got to read part of Chapter 26 before I had to leave and now I have time to come back and I find another update.HELL YEAH!!!!XD
Anyway I was freaking out about Chapter 26 when I read it all the way through.For one their date was a cute-in-Alaina-and-Matt-kinda way lol.But I mainly freaked out when I read the bus was on fire.I swear my face was all like :O!
It seems that it is getting harder and harder for Alaina to keep up her walls to Matt.Which I love that it is but it's understandable why she is so guarded.Alaina did make a valid point when she brought up that things are going to change when Jason and Matt come back to work.I can't personally blame her for being guarded given that fact and she is just protecting herself,which is human nature.Though I really hope that things between Matt and Alaina start to really heat up soon;D
Chapter 27 was a good update in my opinion.Yeah Matt did kind of go overboard with Jimmy but as a reader I can see his frustration with him because he has been trying to win Alaina over and most likely doesn't want anything to go wrong.At least I wouldn't if I was him.
Although it wouldn't kill him to take a chill pill every now and then haha
I loved how Zacky pouted when Alaina said the fortune cookie wasn't for him but Lozii.Ahhhh just priceless XP
Wow Lozii really does take those fortune cookies seriously o.0.That was kind of weird but to each their own.I'm sure everyone does something another person finds weird.
Can't wait for the next update!!!!:D
P.S-My favorite part out of both chapters would have to be this-"Thanks, best friend!" She smiled widely, paying no attention to Brian who was sitting on the floor not looking impressed at all. "I'm gonna go open it in the bathroom."-That was just great:p
P.S.S-I really feel like I'm reading an actual published book here lately.Everything is so well put to together and I really appreciate how both of you don"t seem to forget things.Like the Berry brothers being mentioned is just one example.SO thanks a million to the both of you amazing writers:)