Stuck In This Gorgeous Nightmare - Comments

I just found this story, and I've fallen absolutely in love with it.
Update soon, please. :)

I had to read the first part at least three times because I didnt get why people weren't running around screaming in peril as their tour bus was burned to smithereens. Oh well. I'm tired! Its my off-day today! ^_^
Anyways great chapter can't wait for the update :)

dont joke like she didnt enjoy the kiss

why is the bus on fire?? did Jimmy overfill the waffle iron and start a fire? hmmm are they all gonna have to live on one bus now? that could be interesting

how the hell did the bus catch on fire ... ive had a car do that though it sucked! love this chapter matt is such a sweetie!

awwww matt is so cute xD
Cant wait for the next chapter

how did the bus get set on fire?

LOOOL The bus is on fire, that's something I wasn't expecting !!
=D
Alaina and Matt HAVE to be TOGETHER or I'll kick both their asses, it's obvious she just wants to jump his ass !!
haha
LOVE THE CHAPTER <3

Hey! I would just like to say I love your story! I think it's great and I like the original take you have on a fanfic. It would be awesome to find out what will happen when matt and alaina go on their date... ;) keep up the good work! X

aww!!! poor matt!!!

P.S.S-Sorry for the misspelling of anything,I did this from my IPhone

Sorry I didn't comment or read this update until now but for some reason I have not been getting all the e-mail notification saying there was an update and when I got my subscription page some of the stories say Inactive.So I don't know what that means or anything since I've only had this account for a little while from my friend therefore I am really confused.Also it is very annoying to have to find that there was updates on the story tab of Mibba and not through me e-mails.Okay I'm done complaining now and I'll get on with the commenting.
Well I really enjoyed this chapter because I can tell that things are getting back to normal and there isn't all that tension between everyone.Yea there still is some tension between Matt and Alaina but I hope that goes away soon.Even though Alaina may not want to admit it to herself as a reader you can tell she cares about Matt.Also that she just doesn't want to get hurt by him if she lets him in.Which is okay to an extent as long as she does let him in and hopefully before Matt would give up all hope and try to fine someone who would return his feelings.Well I'm not the creator of this story so I'll just call those rough predictions:p
Anyway onto Lozii and Brian.They are very cute together and I really enjoy how 'whipped' Brian already is.In my opinion it just shows how much he cares for her.They NEED to make their relationship official soon!*Hint Hint*;) hahaha
Well I hope for another fix soon:D
P.S.-This was kind of hard to choose sine I really did enjoy this chapter alot but these are my top two favorite parts.A-"Without me?!" I cried. "And you stayed here?" I added.
"I do as I'm told." He shrugged as Lozii began to snicker.<This is just awsome=p
B-Before I had any realization of what she was doing Lozii leaned over to Zacky and said very loudly,
"Alaina said she'd go on a date with Matt." Zacky gasped and passed it onto Aiden<Ahh true best friends X)

Yay she going on date with him
Cant wait for the next update xD

ITS ALIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIVE!

I loved the water park chapter! haha it was hilarious.
Keep up the good writing and update as soon as your laptop stops being sucha meanie butt! :)

Omg i love this story it so cool
Update soon please xD

I really love your story. Update soon! :)

sorry

Where the hell did Matt go? I thought he was on the bus with them. Alaina and Zack crack me up, I love them. Then Brian talking to Lozii, he can be sweet sometimes.

Alaina and Zacky are funny... Alaina still likes Matt, right?