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aww this was adorable.
real good.

I've already written a comment about your story but I wanted to add a few things. This must be one of the best frerards I've ever read. I re-read it yesterday (I actually printed it and read it as a goodnight story, haha..) It's so intense, I love the way you describe Gerard's thoughts and all the emotions. You're a great writer. I have a feeling I will read this story many times.

Wow, that was just... wow, hot and intense and wow xD

HI! Since I love "Beautful Disaster" and "Falling Away With You" I read this one. Seriously the best one-shot EVER. You are such a good writer. All of your stories are FANTASTIC.

Can't wait for another One Shot. *wink wink* =]

^ Aw thank you!
Well actually, thank Jenni for recommending it to you!
I'm really glad you enjoyed it =]

That was so, so, so cute!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

It was awesome and amazingly written and i'm glad it was recommended to me earlier!!!

It was better than most other one-shots/standalone's because it was different and there was feeling to it etc...

Basically I loved, loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This was a very beautiful story, I loved it!

Hey, I remember this!
Hahaha. Amazing job, as usual, and really really sweet.

And actually, I'm so glad you're writing again. :]]]

^ Hey, thanks a lot!

I want to write another, I really do. I just need some inspiration to hit me because it's hard to write one shots that are different from each other if you get me.

So I just need some ideas!

I just noticed the rating has dropped on this story. It used to be 10 stars, but someone obviously rated it low so it's gone down. Hmm =/

this is fucking amazing.

so much more than sex...

i hate reading porno style writen one-shots that include animal-esque fucking and cheap pick up lines.

this is incredibly beautiful, i love how you captured the moments, the feelings, and each touch perfectly.

im not creeped out that you know so much at all :)

do you plan to write another?

Woah really sweet and awesome story!!!=D

NNNNAAAAAAHHHHH

that's the soiund of me fainting

naomi4bess

Ahhh.
Its actually sick how often I come back and read this story.
But....ahhhh. The story is perfection, never mind Frank.

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That's fucking amazing how do you think of it?.

Thank you! And I don't really know how I thought of it... it just randomly came to me one day, and I wrote it that night. It was all rather random!

That's fucking amazing how do you think of it?.

u are a fabulous riter i can't belive how good you are i'm a little disturbed by how you no so much about it all but i don't think i'll ask anywho jsut saying that was amazing ur so very talated

Oh...
That was sweet.

that is one of the most well-written one-shots i've ever read.

Very beautiful. I especially like the song you used for the title ^_^ Muse = <3

I agree with desk chair racer!!!!!!best standalone ever!