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  • desk chair racer

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    This is without a doubt the best one shot I have ever read. It wasn't a typical one shot, where one of them pines after the other and then they have a lot of sex - it was beautiful. I loved the description and all of Gerard's thoughts. It was simply amazing!
    February 22nd, 2007 at 12:22am
  • B---

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    Oh wow, thank you so much for your comments! :oops:
    February 21st, 2007 at 10:25pm
  • SamSevenfold

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    WOW BESS!
    As you can see on my prof I dont usually read slash
    BUT THAT WAS AMAZING!
    You're such a talented writer!
    Sam xoxo
    February 21st, 2007 at 10:24pm
  • Riot Romance.

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    Bess...OH MY FUCKING GOD.
    That was seriously the best thing I have ever read in my entire life.
    I mean it.
    Oh my god.
    Like...WOAH.
    Woah.
    Woah.
    Woah.
    Im speechless.
    February 21st, 2007 at 10:10pm
  • My Chemical Romance.

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    :shock:

    It's hard to believe this is your first one shot. (Hint hint, you should do them more often.)

    Really though, wow. You are an amazing writer.
    February 20th, 2007 at 05:54pm
  • Evan-lee

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    That was awesome your a really great writer
    Evan
    xxx Clap
    February 20th, 2007 at 01:52am