Blue Moon - Comments

I love love love it :D Can't wait for more :D

YESH hes back!!! cant wait for the next one:)

Yay Wills back :D

Yay Wills back :D

Awww yay Will finally admits it :D cant wait for the next update

cant wait on the next one :) have fun writing :)

@Mel
I'm so glad you decided to upload today!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nook don't leave stah and update Lol

have fun on the camping trip! and i love this story cant wait for when you get back and make will get the stick out of his ass. have fun writing :)

Omg i love this story i cant wait to read the next chapter i hope Will isn't to pissed off.

I absolutly love this story. There's not many good werewolf stories out there , but this one is amazing. I'm actually hooked :) please update soon. On top of that your long chapters are a great read. Some errors hearcand there but I'm not bothered by them. Reread though just in case so an editor doesn't give you the whole works lol :D still it's amazing. I love the relation ship. And that you put it in parts ,not sequels. Keep going. :D

-amber-

p.s maybe u can swing by page. Not werewolf stories but check then out. Please :) oh and UPDATE lol

-from comment swap.
The title is right up my street, it evokes such gorgeous imagery. I like the main body of the layout, but the background is, I think, a little too fussy and distracts from the image of the girl and her introduction. I like that you’ve done something so ‘science-fiction’ that still retains a modern originality. I’d look at your grammar surrounding speech, though. It really lets everything down.
‘it's you mother's’ on the first page, for example.
‘Chose for me’
She smiled a bit,” Up it is then,” she said.
These were the ones I thought were the worst from the first page.

Wow this story is really interesting. Its original and its the first i've seen like this on mibba, or I might not be looking hard enough. Its a very interesting idea. Even though its is quite an original idea this idea of the girl not wanting to do "x" is a little over used but I like the way you have used it

Wow. I'm not sure what I should say about this. I've always been attracted to stories that take place in the old times, because they usually have some sense of witchcraft behind them, and even though I'm only on chapter one, I plan to keep reading. So far, this is amazing! Also, I love Elizabeth; she's got the kind of stubborn personality I love in a female main character. She's really funny in her own way too, and I'm going to keep on reading! Keep up the good work!

cant wait for the next chapter and i like the akwardness in the romance part they can be very akward in the being anyways. anyways have fun wirting

Another thing I noticed is that she says 'stupid' and I don't think that is really appropriate for her era.

I didn't really like the summary. It didn't really draw my attention and you switch tenses a few times.

As for the first chapter, I thought it was good! I noticed a few grammar mistakes: using a instead of an, missing a few commas, etc. The plot is very good though, it seems well developed and you can tell from the beginning that it is going to go somewhere. You have a nice main character that seems very relatable, and I really like her!

hi hi cant wait for the next one!! have fun writing the next one. to help give us our addiction!

hi hi cant wait for the next one!! have fun writing the next one. to help give us our addiction!

Theres a few grammar errors throughout the story but besides that I think it's completely amazing. I haven't been able to stop reading! Update soon.