Blue Moon - Comments

hi hi cant wait for the next one! hope you have fun writing :)

Small problems with grammar but it was especially noticeable in the early chapters.
Really like the theme of this story and for me personally, I love long chapters. They are just a pleasure to read. And I love guys who have a bit longer hair in stories. Just my preference probably but it totally gets to me.
Though I have questions that if she starts to build up the house again, wouldn’t other people get curious because she’s supposed to be dead?
Overall, everything is great. Even character development on which I always nag at xD
This story totally keeps me captivated which, sadly, doesn’t happen that often.
Oh, and I noticed you have edited the chapters before, but it still sticks out too much how you use the words ’scene’ vs ’seen’

I love green. That’s all.
Totally subscribing!

First of all, I love the layout. It's really classy and pretty and the banner is really nice too. The summary drew me in, the only thing I'd suggest taking out is the warning, because it's a little distracting and unnecesary.

There were a couple little mistakes, but nothing serious, and I quite enjoyed this, it was interesting to read something set in another era.

Hello, I just want to say how lovely the story seems. It's written pretty well. The only real problem that I have is the chapter length. It's probably just a personal preference, but I find that reading shorter chapters is easier. Anyway, the plot is good, from what I've read so far, it's written pretty well, too. Good work.

i like how the summary reads. it's a different sort of fairytale, one that you tend to not find, and i like it. i love how you make her sort of whimsical and triyng to break free, even though she also knows that she can't. i like lucia's character, it's sort of nice, and i adore how she wore pants the one time lmfao, that's sort of wonderful. i love how nervous the horse was, but she calmed it pretty easily; then the tidbit about her dad was nice. i'm curious who the person who caught her was!

I stayed up til 4 in the morning reading this story! And it didn't disappoint. Besides some grammar errors and typos, that was quickly subsided as you read on. I fell in love with it and I'm glad comment swap game this to me. Subscribed! And I can't wait to see what happens! :)

The voice in this story is amazing! In a away, I feel like I am in her setting, living and breathing the fresh air. I'm only on chapter one, but you've got yourself another subscriber! I can't wait to read all the other chapters. I guess I got a long way to go! I really loved this.
Ry

hi hi i just finished reading all the chapters!yeah spend all day reading hehe. the only thing i can say is to watch when your typing you tend to miss a word everyonce in a while. i love the story though im off now to subscribe to it and cant wait to read number 41 :) have fun writing

Can't wait for the next chapter!

And yeah, back then it was actually illegal to be gay (as in people did get severly punished for it). Quite sad really. :(

Love the story.. I wish that everything works out for them!! Really good and way to keep it going with the huge twist at the end of act one was totally not expecting that :D Plus I wanna read more!!

well, I should be doing school work, but I'm reading this instead. lol.

Anyway, OHMIGOSH!!! X[ Poor Elizabeth!! I hope she gets better from that... almost happening.

at least will agreed...but poor thing almost getting raped!! and nice going at being a rebel lol

i looved this update!! but i wish it was a little longer, thats my only critique

Ok so honestly, I was going to cry at the end of this chapter. I only managed to get teary though (phew!). Loved it all the same. :)

OH MY GOD OH MY GOD OH MY GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

that was such a lovely update!!! (:

Update please!
I found this story and I am IN LOVE with it. :D
Please update soon!!

Very addicting story. I'm am positively in love with these characters.

Heeey!! Sorry, Ive been away for a few days. Good chapter :) Although I am completely curious about Collin... jumping out a window.

aahhh!!! thank you for letting me know the chapter was up!!!!!!! ahh! is collin a werewolf too? or something more? oooh i'm so excited!!!! this was an AMAZING chapter!