October 24th, 2011 at 01:54pm
You won the whole comment rape session :) please be patient cause I will rape every story with comments but it'll take a few days. :)
I love this! Amelia is one badass and this story is unique by its writing in the view of the evil Character. And I must say that I am jealous of you fanfiction writing for I can't do the same. Your description is well written, but of course, there is room for improvement.
I also suggest writing description of Amelia's clothing in the story rather than add a link. Off to the third chapter :)
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Can't wait to read more ^^ I'm in love haha