Wish You Were Here - Comments

This is such a great story :) but it sounds just like raise your voice but oh we'll this is still an awesome story

I am so sorry for not staying in touch. I just finished the story...it's 1:30 am...and I absolutely loved it! <3 A lot of it turned out as I predicted, but it was a beautiful story. I cried many times. And the Hey Monday song totally goes with it. I love how they all went to school in New York. It's perfect.
Now I have to catch up on all of the other stories I've been missing....so I probably won't comment to you in forever again. But I just want to send my love (via the internet :P). The story was truly amazing, Jenna, and I'm sad to see it end, but at the same time it was the perfect ending for it.

So I stumbled upon this story while looking for something interesting to read and here I am now, two hours and an ocean of tears later, absolutely speechless. Reading this brought back my first experience of death when my cousin was killed in a car crash seven years ago. Its really not something that I think about too often and reading this was almost like I was reliving it all over again. Now I may not have gone on a cross country trip, but some of the emotions that Josey felt, the guilt and the anger, they were there. I am pretty sure that I am not the first to tell you this but you are an amazing writer. You took something so personal and tragic and turned it into a beautiful story. Who knows? You may very well become the next Sarah Dessen!
All the best!
- Tyler

Grr, my comment didn't send! Lucky I checked again.
Anyways hoping this works now. It's over! :O
It's all gone by so fast, such a wonderful story you have written here :)
I love the character development and the songs you put in this story.
It all worked together perfectly! I thoroughly enjoyed reading this. ♥

When this book is published and everyone loves it - no if's in there hun! - I will be the first to buy ten copies: One for me, and the rest for my friends! :P I just have to read the whole thing now and not just the first couple chapters!!! :D I know I don't need to pray for your success, 'cause God's definitly given you talent that will bring you all the way to the top! <3

I loved the update! :)
It ended on a good note :)

As for you review, here goes:
Jenna is an amazing writer. She knows how to bring her characters to life.

Jenna, this story was absolutely amazing. Honestly, I'm speechless. Not only does this story capture your full attention to detail and make you read with and feel so many emotions, but it also makes you stop and think about life and how much one event can change or impact someone and the people around them. I don't think I'll ever see another story like this on here. I'm sad that this is my last comment for this story. But honestly, I think it helped you grow as a writer. Being able to capture the attention of a reader and make it so they can feel emotion like that is talent. I can't wait to see what story you come up with next.

Ahhhhhhhhh, it's over!!! I loved the ending! She is finally learning to cope with her feelings, she made up with he mom, and her and nick are okay. Wish you were here is one of my favorite songs off the Hey Monday album, I've loved it since I first read it!
I loved this story sososososososo much, it's sad to see it go! Way to go for being such a great writer and making an awesome story.
Now, I'm going to try to do this review thing. I think I know what I'm doing, but if not just ignore what I say haha Truthfully I skimmed half of the authors note it was so looooooooooong ;)

My review:
'In the story 'wish you were here' Jenna captures the lives and feelings of people captured by tragedy and turned it into an adventure you will never forget'.

(sorry if it stinks)

Last...comment...from...me...on...this...story....
Ahhhhhhhhh
<3

Ahhh I'm so sad this story is ending! But, great chapter! I'm glad she met her dad, and that her and Nick made up. This was a great story, looking forward to the epilogue :)

Aww, that was a sweet ending. I'm glad she forgave nick (: and I loves that throughout this story I kind of had this idea of what would happen, my "theory" and I was right too! I love that. Reading a story you love and being able to figure it out; it's an awesome feeling. Anyway, can't wait for the next and final update. I loved this story. Jenna, I think this helped you grow in your writing style. Can't wait for whatever else you have up your sleeve (;

Awesome, amazing, && any other good adjective :)
I almost started crying at the end.
I like how you ended it.
When Josey started off her letter I thought she wound up going to Standford; I'm glad that she decided to go to Julliard.
Yay, Josey forgave Nick at the end :)

Oh!
You have two mistakes:
1) He didn’t seem that, though, as he showed me to a guest room.
What doesn't he seem...?

2)If it turns out that you just got accepted to one, then you should go to ^that^ one you got accepted to, but that’s the only time I’m going to express my opinion on this.
That should be the, unless that's how the sentence does go.

I will be extremely sad once this story has ended.
POST THE EPILOGUE SOON PLEASE!! :)

Awesome update!
I'm sad that there are only two chapters left :/
Oh!
In the last chapter (17), right here:“If anyone’s sleeping on the floor, it’s me. You’ve been driving all day; you’re must be beyond exhausted.”
You need to change the you're to you.
I can't remember if there is anything else...
UPDATE SUPER SOON PLEASE!! :)

I can't wait for the last chapter and the epilogue. oh my gosh, I'm sad that this story is ending. But I know you'll always have something interesting up your sleeve. (: can't wait. This was an amazing update.

Intense. Haha I loved the whole chapter. Her and nick need to make up now! Haha Great update! :)

This chapter was interesting...I wanna know what happens next!
Can't wait for the next update (:

Loved the chapter! I had kind of an idea that Nick was somehow involved, but now it's confirmed! Awww, it's almost ending :( that just means I have to keep reading your other stories! Haha Another great chapter, Jenna!

Oh My Goodness, Jenna! Now, I finally know what happened! :O I was close with my theory. That excites me. I'm sad that there are only 2 more chapters left, though. This story is one of my favorites. But hey, I'll get over it. I'm sure I'll find another one of your stories that I'll fall in love with. (:

Oh my gravy.

This story is good good good.
I bet my only piece of cash here in the States, a quarter, that my friend will love this.

Um, Jenna, I'm in love with this story, you have no idea. Haha I can't wait for the next update...no matter how long it takes you. I totally understand...school can be very hectic and time consuming. I've been dealing with the same thing. Haha anyway, I'm about to reply to your long comment from my profile (: love the story.

Jenna! I decided to comment again. I was going to wait till the end but I couldn't help myself! :D
Loved the chapters so far, and the story is really getting interesitng.
And the playlists featured are heaps good !
Update soon.