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  • Flux

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    Hahaha! Love this story :)
    February 2nd, 2011 at 05:09am
  • Flux

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    Hahaha! Love this story :)
    February 2nd, 2011 at 05:09am
  • Red Riding Hoodie

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    I absolutely loved it...I love how every time he sees her, he checks her out...haha.
    Can't wait for more!

    xoxo
    January 31st, 2011 at 11:11pm
  • SynysterxSavannah

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    love it!!!!
    more soon!?!?!
    :3
    haha "Mr. Haner"
    January 31st, 2011 at 11:03pm
  • amyEternal7x

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    God, this is great. :))
    I loved it.
    More soon.
    <333
    January 31st, 2011 at 04:35am
  • Klarque

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    I love this story is so awesome, I love it!
    Haha the sexual tension between Mitchi and Brian is hilarious, their bickering is so funny :)
    Can't wait til the next one :D
    -Crizz
    January 31st, 2011 at 02:36am
  • asylum's riot.

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    I followed you on tumblr cuz I decided to actually use mine yesterday xD
    I'm the bassistlove person...
    BRIAN. He actually seemed semi sexy in this chapter D:
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:24am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    That was a cool chapter. I found the first bit was a tad boring, but that's probably just because Brian wasn't in it....
    I love how you put in the humour in this chapter. It was good and really lightened the mood. I think that would be a good thing to continue doing in future chapters, just putting in the occasional small funny sentence.
    The part with Brian was good as well. Can't wait for their next interaction! :) There isn't much else for me to say really....
    Update again soon please :) I love reading this story!
    January 30th, 2011 at 05:21am
  • unholy confessions;;

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    This is so freaking good. I just want more now! Haha.
    January 26th, 2011 at 04:59am
  • amyEternal7x

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    Amazin'!!
    I loved this.
    And I love you! <333
    January 25th, 2011 at 08:40am
  • cobra9874

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    love this story!!!
    January 25th, 2011 at 06:26am
  • foREVer In Shadows

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    Update soon(: oh yah it's getting gooood!(:
    January 25th, 2011 at 05:00am
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    Just started reading and I'm really enjoying this story :) I never read teacher/student romance stories, but this is a good exception to make!
    Usually I do point out errors or small things to improve on, but I didn't find anything to highlight and say you can improve on, so good job! You really are describing well and kept me interested for the whole chapter (which do seem quite long, but maybe I just always read stories with smaller chapters...).
    I hope you keep up the good work and update soon :) This is a great story
    January 25th, 2011 at 03:54am
  • With_Vengeance

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    I really, really like this. It's awesome and I can't wait to read more!! :D
    January 25th, 2011 at 03:30am
  • asylum's riot.

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    You have a lot of Brian stories. D: You should do a Matt one. :)
    But I like this one <3
    and he's still a DOUCHE. :3
    January 25th, 2011 at 03:25am
  • unholy confessions;;

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    Oh man, oh man, this is so gonna be good.
    January 24th, 2011 at 05:17am
  • kmcgeezy

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    This is great so far!
    There really isn't anything that I would change.
    It should get very interesting with Miss Lane and Mr. Haner.
    :D
    January 23rd, 2011 at 07:28am
  • asylum's riot.

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    DOUCHE. I knew it.
    But I do like Mr. Baker. Sounds like my type of teacher.
    :3 <3
    Sounds promising, even if it is a Brian story ;)
    January 23rd, 2011 at 07:08am
  • slumflower

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    Love it allready!! Haha, Miss. Lane, is awesome:)
    and Mr. Haner does sound sexy;D
    January 23rd, 2011 at 06:58am
  • Atrocity's Mask

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    I totally forgot to tell you that I would be checking this story out too. It slipped my mind xD I wish I had Brian teaching my music theory classes. That would be soo cool. I like how she doesn't like him. =D
    January 21st, 2011 at 08:28am
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