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  • D. Dixon

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    I loved these updates. ^_^ I'm sorry I didn't get a chance to update. I wish I could see them working something out, but I don't know if I do, and that's sad 'cause they'd be great together! :/ :) <3 Can't wait for more!
    June 20th, 2011 at 03:47am
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    There you go, that layout's way better to read than the one before
    Especially because the font from before was rather close together and stuff and thus illegiable, but now it's all better =)
    Wow, Zacky pretty out did himself there
    I guess that Jenetter hadn't expected something like this
    And that was the best thing, showing the other guys in town that Jen isn't just one of the guys, but still a woman
    I really can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)

    Ps. There two mistakes I found in this chapter, I wanted to make you aware of. Or well rather, one mistake and the other it more like a tip, you could say.
    ...to enjoy her touch for just a minute while ether moved outside to the care before he.... -> I pulled it right out of the middle of the sentence, I think you missed an 'i' there, it should be either

    The fact that he doesn't see it when you're dressed for ranching just probes he's shortsighted, but believe me, Jennette, no one's so short sighted and ignorant that... -> it believe that the right word would be nearsighted and it's written together, but i don't know for sure
    June 18th, 2011 at 09:36pm
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    Oh and one more thing....I do have one small complaint. It's about the layout (background and all) of the story. I really have to squint my eyes to properly read, but maybe that's me. Maybe you should create your own layout making the font a bit bigger or something....Just and idea though, you don't have to do it =)
    June 17th, 2011 at 09:23pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    This story is brilliant, different, but absolutely brilliant
    Although the idea of both of them going on a 'date'....
    It won't do any good of them trying not to get close to one another
    A date does the complete opposite, although they do seem really great together
    Zacky will leave at one point, sooner than anyone would like
    And both will get hurt in the end cause they feel something for the other one
    I really wonder what Gena has planned....
    She really wouldn't get far in court though
    She dropped her baby off without a reason and just left to god knows where...
    And Zacky, who had been in a hospital and all of that, just to look for his baby he didn't have a clue about
    I really can't wait for more
    Hope you update soon :)
    June 17th, 2011 at 09:20pm
  • D. Dixon

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    Guh! Love this story so much! I really hope Gena keeps her nose out. >.< She didn't want Connor, so she deserves nothing. BUT I do hope that Janette and Zacky realize kissing is a good thing. XD Lovely chapter! More soon. :D
    May 27th, 2011 at 05:45am
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    Aww this was adorable good job :)
    May 18th, 2011 at 08:02pm
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    Wow sorry I haven't checked my emails in awhile. :P But I loved these updates! I so feel for Janette and Zacky, and I hope they can find each other! :] More soon!
    April 29th, 2011 at 06:19am
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    I loved those last couple chapters! ^_^ I love this story. <3 I'm worried about what Gena will do, but I'm excited to see their relationship progress. :] More soon!
    March 6th, 2011 at 05:33pm
  • I_Like_It_Rough

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    I like this chapter.
    =D
    March 1st, 2011 at 11:00pm
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    She can't be over him! That's just wrong. Please update soon.
    -OMGfun111 (Jamie)-
    February 27th, 2011 at 01:42am
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    Aww! That was so cute! They're perfect for each other. ^_^ Lol, loved the update.<3 More soon!
    February 25th, 2011 at 01:10am
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    I like this chapter, but I am dissapointed at no sexy time. hahahahahaha Update soon!
    OMGfun111's friend,
    Ally
    February 24th, 2011 at 02:12am
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    :P Small towns always gossip. Trust me, I know. It sucks. But loved the update! ^_^ Lol, more soon!
    February 21st, 2011 at 05:45am
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    <3
    February 19th, 2011 at 08:16am
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    Aw, I'm so sorry about your grandmother. :[ My thoughts are with you and your family. But this was a great update, and I can't wait for more. :]
    February 16th, 2011 at 03:58pm
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    I'M SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO COMMENT, my computer hates me. Your story is original something you don't really find. You make something so simple and turn it into amazingness!
    February 9th, 2011 at 03:04am
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    I'M SORRY IT TOOK ME SO LONG TO COMMENT, my computer hates me. Your story is original something you don't really find. You make something so simple and turn it into amazingness!
    February 9th, 2011 at 03:04am
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    I don't get why no one else is commenting on this. *humph* It's an amazing story, and I can't wait for more! :]
    February 9th, 2011 at 12:34am
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    Aw, that was so cute. ^_^ Loved it! More soon.
    January 29th, 2011 at 07:42pm
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    Loved the update. ^_^ I like how she's got her standards like that, in not letting him into the house. I know I wouldn't either. :] Anyways, more soon! :]
    January 26th, 2011 at 01:02am
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