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  • River Young;

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    Sorry about not commenting on the last chapter! They were both really good! The picture at the bottom made me laugh too!!! xD
    April 17th, 2011 at 09:05pm
  • No Brakes; No Mercy

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    Sorry for not commenting the last few chapters. My subscription thing messed up again. I like how they're getting closer, but they have to keep it away from everyone else. Please update!
    April 17th, 2011 at 02:24pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Really fun and interesting chapter :] I can't wait to see training time. Should be interesting!

    Great chapter :]
    Can't wait for more <3
    April 17th, 2011 at 05:49am
  • River Young;

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    I really wished she would have kicked butt you know? But I guess it'll have to wait...Great chapter! I liked her angry speech quite a bit! :)
    April 1st, 2011 at 04:53am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    I love how this chapter entwines a summary of Murtagh's past and travels with Icenia but also has some new stuff :D
    Yay for the queen for giving Murtagh a second chance!
    That sexy beast deserves one (;

    Great update<3
    I really loved it!
    March 22nd, 2011 at 03:33am
  • River Young;

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    Good chapter! Sad, but good! Murtagh is the bomb!
    March 22nd, 2011 at 01:49am
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    “I know”, he said jokingly and grinning proudly. After a moment he asked,“ What have I done?”
    That made me laugh for some reason. lol :) Thorn sounds so adorable!!!! x) I want a baby dragon! lol Good chapter!
    March 8th, 2011 at 02:05am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    o.o they had to open their mouths didn't they! Come on there has to be some piece!
    And awww Thorn is so damn cute >< why is it the dragons were the funniest characters in the Eragon series? I mean seriously!? LOL

    I loved the update<3
    Great job :D

    Oh i am going to update my stories really soon. I just had the flu so my mind is all mushy XP
    March 7th, 2011 at 08:41am
  • No Brakes; No Mercy

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    I love the story! I really like how for Morzan under your character list, you put the picture of Dracula from 'Van Helsing'. That was rather amusing. Please update soon!
    March 7th, 2011 at 04:14am
  • River Young;

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    I got mentioned in your author's notes!! Yay! xD This was a good chapter and Icenia's little idea cracked me up. lol Can't wait for the next chapter! :)
    February 28th, 2011 at 11:51pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Hehe Murtagh is falling in love C: So cute :D!!!
    i like how they act around each other and its cool that she was best friends with a snow leopard :D

    Great update :D
    I really enjoyed it!!!!
    February 21st, 2011 at 07:41am
  • River Young;

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    Wow. This is insane! In a good way! Good writing! Murtagh....*sighs* So fine! xD
    February 20th, 2011 at 08:47pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Holy shit not Morzan!!! o.o things have just gone from bad to worse in 1 update!
    Gah this is not good. And right after a lovey dovey chapter too *pouts*
    And yay for an udpate in Murtagh's POV :)

    Fantabulous job hun<3

    I really enjoyed the update and thanks for the shout out to my Murtagh story. I shall do the same when I update mine for your story :D
    February 13th, 2011 at 12:10pm
  • autumnfreakshow

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    Damn Urgals! They should all die!
    Though that was a pretty kick ass fight she had :D

    Great job
    I can't wait for more (:
    February 11th, 2011 at 07:20am
  • No Brakes; No Mercy

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    I like this story, much more than that stupid movie and those great books! lol.
    Can't wait for a new chapter!
    February 11th, 2011 at 02:47am
  • autumnfreakshow

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    I really like where your story is going (;

    It has definitly caught my attention! And Murtagh, how can I say no to that man!

    Love this story and I cannot wait for more :D
    February 6th, 2011 at 09:45pm
  • Ice_Cat

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    thank you for the question. i answered it in chapter 8 in the author's notes.
    January 30th, 2011 at 08:06pm
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    Yeey, new chapter.
    But you never explained why she has a tail.
    I never remember from the books that every elf has a tail.
    I do remember that some elves adapted their looks to their likings, and one looked like a cat.
    January 30th, 2011 at 09:47am
  • Ice_Cat

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    Thanks! It just didn't seem right to me that such a cool character got such an unfitting story.
    January 23rd, 2011 at 11:34pm
  • Xx-fairywings-xX

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    No comments?
    I love how you twisted the story:)
    I won't say it's better than Eragon, but this one is good:)
    Keep going
    January 23rd, 2011 at 11:23am