Oh my swear... I <3 this story.. ^_^ funny thing. I was listening to Love Isnt Always Fair when i saw the tile name... >_< and oh my bob bryar. You have MCR songs listed in it... Its and mpreg. It involves jimmy. It has avenged in it... I Love you... Like seriously.
Oh my tacos , did Jimmy seriously just do THAT ? Me : Jimmy stop being an ass and go say sorry to Jay Jimmy : I don't want a kid though ? Jay : YOUFUCKINGASSHOLEYOUDON"TCAREDOYOU?YOU"RENEVERGOINGTOSEEYOURKIDEVER! Me : Jay , you're just saying this because you're pregnant and your hormones are raging you want Jimmy to be part of your kid's and your lives. Ok ? Jimmy is going to apologize right now. Isn't that right Jimmy ? * whispers a threat in Jimmy's ear involving me a llama , kerosene and a blow torch * Jimmy : Y - yes ma'am . Sorry Bluejay.
BLACK VEIL BRIDES! *jumps around* Sorry what? Oh story yeah.
This was...amazing and confusing. I do not want to sound like a total bitch here but the sentences 'Val and Jay were having a fight. Jay thought Val was cheating on her with me' were just not right sounding. They were short and choppy without really anything to them. You could have explained that through dialogue instead but if you wanted it that way, I will not judge.
Huh. Jamey over reacted on so many fucking levels. Jimmy wants a child with you no doubt. It is just that this is a shock to him. He had no clue that he would wake up that day and have the fact that his lover is pregnant with his child is being shoved into his face. He is not ready. Plain and simple. And if Jamey cannot come to understand Jimmy's reasons as well, then sucks for him. He will end up alone then.
Amazing amazing chapter <333. And thank you for telling me that it updated. It was rather kind and pretty epic that you did that :D.
So. Hmph. A cat demon? Interesting interesting. Oh and I finally looked at the character list when I saw Damien and questioned if he was a male or not because you never know really. And I saw you used Bill and Tomi from Tokyo Hotel! ;). I like that! Gorgeous men.
Anyway, I adore this story and everything inside it!!!!!!!!!! <33333.