My "Twin", the Drummer - Comments

cant wait for more

Um. What?

just found this and couldnt stop reading!
can't wait for more!

So Jamey is a fallen angel-vampire? This is all confusing now.

This sentence bothers me: Jimmy whispered huskily and began to nip at my neck and leave large hickies. Personally, I dislike having two and's in a sentence. It seems...weird and choppy. How I would have wrote it is probably different than how you would write it but I would write it as 'and began to nip at my neck, leaving large hickies.

I adore Jamey's nickname and that hot sex scene. Oh Zacky. Asking if Jamey was okay? Clearly he was darling ;). Update soon <3333.

I’m not lieing Lying is spelled wrong :).

Everyone is just cute. And hot. And just....damn. Amazing amazing smexy chapter ;)). <3333.

Um. Yeah, that was. That was confusing since it happened so suddenly/randomly o_o. But I kinda understand it know. I am just happen that Jamey his wings and told him. Just am wondering how Val knew. Update soon :). <333.

=D

I FUCKING LOVE YOU WHORE!!!

Okay first off. How the fuck do you pronounce Thalla's name? I thought he was a chick at first o_o. So sorry Thalla :(. I love you *hugs him*. And you guys for updating. So Jamey is not really related to Jimmy. Hm....why does this seem suspicious? Update soon :)) <333.

I liked it too! I LOVE THIS STORY!
lol, update again soon! xD

I LOVE YOU, YOU FUCKING AWESOME WHORE!

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"OH FUCK! DO THAT AGAIN!" XD
When does vampire-and-fallen-angel-ness come in?

I really want Jimmy to see Jamey with his wings. Imagine how beautiful he would be with those gorgeous black wings <3333. I am so glad they found each other :).

Awesome.

I think I you, Yotora, for that. I don't, but HOW COULD YOU KILL JAYME???? I love this chapter though, it is nicely written.

Please update soon!

OHHH YEAHHHH FALLEN ANGEL!!! *hugs*. Fallen Angels are sexxy ;). But but that was so cute of what Jamey said when he was talking about falling from Heaven if he had too. Gah, beautiful :).

75% fallen angel and 25% vampire and my vote should count more than anyone else's because you love me and if not well... oh.
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Errors:

and I could tell her was It should be 'he was'.

Don’t push it.” You forgot the quotation marks in the beginning.

Smiling I fell onto the hotel bed It should be 'smiling, I fell...'

He laid down on the best to test It should be 'bed' not best.

I choose whichever one has wings because I love wings :). I think both a fallen angel and a dragonkin can have wings butttt if you want to go with the whole voodoo thing and the maybe he got this power from a spell or whatever then you will have to go with the dragonkin. It is purely your decision :). I am just here to persuade and help haha. Awesome chapter :).

I think you should pick Fallen angel. It would be a little weird with being part dragon.

I think you should pick...A!!! It'd be like whoa Jamey's a vamp?!? :DDD so yeah I pick A haha