Get Up While You Can - Comments

I love it! I finally have Spring Break, so I get to catch up with all my reading! :)
I really think that was pretty low of Gee since he told Dom he loves her...

<3 you too.

That chapter was pretty deep, not going to lie. I can't believe she did it, but shit has to get deeper before it gets better.

I have a feeling that Frank might slip up with this one, who knows, I don't think he is going to be able to keep this secret...too much at stake.

Nat thinking that she lost Dom? that is some tough and deep shit. I can't even imagine what that would feel like *shivers* I really want Dom to get the help she needs and break away from this vicious cycle/pattern once and for all.

Can't wait to see what is next. I hope Ray calls her and gives her the pep talk she needs. Ray Toro to the rescue, with his bad-assery. *wink wink* you know what I'm talking about. ;D

Still, I get pissed off every time I go to your comment page and see that you only have two pages of comments... You should have a million of them...

Anyways, the chapter was very good. I am kinda pissed at Mikey, but at least Frank let her know that he cares.

Update soon! I can't wait!

That seems to be my mantra 'it has to get worse before it gets better' and all that shit. haha.

This chapter was ubber depressing, but I know it had to happen. I get that Mikey is mad, but doesn't he realize that by cutting her contact he is signing her get-to-take-drugs-again permission slip? oh Mikey, I get it but you really need to figure out that girl you love is not the same girl that Dom is.

And Gee saying the L word? Boy's got to know that is way too soon and she is way to fragile. The guys just have to let Ray deal with her, he seems to know how to handle Dom without breaking her...(see that, little encouragement for the Ray-Dom loveline. hehe)

So the flashbacks give a little insight into why she is so messed up. hopefully over time more will be revealed. Can't wait to find out what happens next!

THREE CHEERS FOR FOUR STARS! HIP HIP HOORAY, HIP HIP HOORAY, HIP HIP HOORAY! I knew you'd get there. :D Next stop, 5 STARS! xoxo

p.s. totally get the busy-ness, I've been right there with you chica. hopefully we can get back on track ;D

Okay, first. This was a depressing but very well written chapter.
Second, how the fuck does this story not have a million comments?!
Third, update soon! (:

Aw... I love Frank.. Haha, way to go Ray.
Mikey does need to get over it, BUT, I'm glad they apologized.
Your writing keeps me wanting more!

Hooray for Ray! haha. I knew that he would take care of business.

I love how you approached this chapter, I remember talking about it with you and it came out even better than I saw in my head.

'hug it out' lol <3. Can't wait to see where you take this. Dom needs to get on the straight and narrow because otherwise this band might fall apart around her.

xoxo

DOM YOU BETTER BE GOING TO FLUSH THAT BAGGIE!!!

I hate Luke with the fiery passion of a thousand suns! for realz yo. hehe.

I really want to know why she hates nicknames so much. it must be something pretty bad if she is so torn up about it. and I agree with Dom, that time of Gee's life wasn't funny it was depressing as hell and I am so glad that he overcame it to become the man he is today. Gee <3

Can't wait to see where you go with this and what lies around the corner. Until next time, much ado about nothing. hehe. xoxo

Oh, update soon.. (:

aw, poor mikey/gee/nat... Lol... Dom has issues I do believe.

Stupid bitch is hurting Mikey... ):
However, I'm giving Gee props for being there.
Poor mikes... ):

Yay! I loved this. Well, not really until Ray came by. But it was really well written! I cannot wait for me! You just made my day!

Ray does equal <3.

Horray for Ray! Three Cheers for Sweet Revenge! I am so happy he showed up when he did because I was going to hit her for being stupid and calling Luke.

I adore Ray. He is so totally her anti-drug. :D like, literally. I love how he listens to her and doesn't judge and that she feels comfortable enough to talk to him...she doesn't really seem to be able to do that with any of the other guys. It's usually awkward, someone doesn't know what to talk about or someone gets mad. With Dom and Ray they are chillin, he doesn't judge, lets her talk when she feels like she has too. I like their relationship. Even when Ray got a little awkward it was a cute awkward. oh, I <3 Ray. I'm still on the bandwagon for Ray getting the girl in the end. *wink wink*

Can't wait to find out what happens next. I loved their first lesson. :D and you know I love 'Desert Song' so I throughly approve. xoxo

Poor Mikey. I just want to hug him, squeeze him tight, and tell him that in the end everything will be ok...doesn't make it any better, but hey we all need some comfort some times.

So that proverbial cat is out of the bag, so to speak. I'm surprised that Mikey was the one to ask, and that he had his suspicions. I mean I know Mikey is a very smart man but I figured he was so deeply wrapped up in Dom that he wouldn't even suspect that something was going on with Gee.

Then again the insight into the fact that she is not the best friend he use to know shows alot about what has been going on. People have changed, circumstances have changed. Life keeps going...

You know this is slowly killing my hopelessly romantic heart. Bring on some Ray, I need a little 'ray' of sunshine in these dark and dismal times. bad pun, i know, but you love it. :D 'you know it's true, you know it's true' hehe.

xoxo A

:'( Oh my... I am so sad now... You have to update, because I must know what happens...

Aw... I feel a little worse for Mikey each time...
Update really soon.. (:

I see the storm on the horizon...and I don't approve.

I know I can't stop it though, so I'll sit back and watch the house burn. I know I'm mixing up my metaphors but I don't care because glass houses sink ships. he he. ;D

But in all seriousness I'm not a fan of where this is going but I know it has to happen. I'm mad at the circumstance not at you. I love you, my bloody valentine. <3 we be peas in a pod.

I am looking forward to how this story forms. It was interesting seeing an early chapter you had written, it seems different but like it fits all the same.

I did have to laugh though, What the hell just happened? Poor Mikey, the boy is just trying to figure shit out. I don't want his innocence to be tainted. I can see now that Dom truly is addicted to alot of things and I don't think she can save herself this time...she might just need an unconventional hero.

Anyway, love this story, (you KNOW I love you) and I am so proud of you for what you are doing with this.

Until next time. xoxo

With each bit of Dom's past that I get, I get more and more saddened with all she has gone through. Poor Girl. I really want to give Luke a piece of my mind and a bit more than a slap. I hope Ray messed his face up. :D

I still have a one 'way' ticket on the Indecisive train. I cannot pick between my boys. If she ends up with Mikey Gee is heartbroken. If she ends up with Gee Mikey is heartbroken. I don't want that to happen to either one of them. I don't want them to fight or hate each other or anything.

I will continue to hold a heart shaped torch for Ray in this regard. Man with the plan needs some lovin. *wink wink* :D

Can't wait to see where this goes next. oh, and by the by, did Frank and Nat make up yet? Hope they did because they are too cute not to be perfect together...and I can't even hate them for it. xoxo

Oh shit... I feel like so bad for Mikey... Well, good writing...

Xoxo
Jaz

ohhh fuck shits gonna hit the fan sooo we are gonna have a room full of shit