Get Up While You Can - Comments

She and Ray are the cutest! :D

I kind of want them to be together now, since I can't seem to decide between the ways. lol

woot woot for Shirley Temples. Crack in a glass, yet purely legal...and addictive. I want grenadine now. lol may need to make a witches brew run. haha

I was so excited when Ray knocked Luke in the jaw. I was waiting for someone to hit him. The man is a douche and needs to be taught a lesson.

oh, and ps Nat and Frank are so adorable. Fighting about being too perfect? if only we could all be so lucky.

love the update. Can't wait for more.

oh and by the by, Happy Singles Awareness day. <3 Will you be my bloody valentine? xoxo

Aw... Wow... I am soooo not sure who I want her to be with, but now I kinda want her to be with Ray! Lol, but I cannot wait for the next chapter! Update soon!

xoxo
Jaz

AWW! I am still so torn!!!

Mikey is adorable, and cute, and sweet, and will be so heartbroken when he finds out the truth.

but then Gee just blew me away with how he handled that situation...well, except for the whole lying to Mikey thing, that was a big no no. But he was so gentle and loving with her.

Poor Dom, She has been through hell and back, and now she's on a one way ticket back into it.

I really hope that she doesn't go back to the drugs, but i have a feeling it is only a matter of time. Can't wait for more.

oh, and p.s. I love the little sugar line at the end. oh so Gee. :D Aw, sugar.

Okay, I am like... offically addicted to this story!
I can't wait for the next chapter.
Update soon!

Luke. is. a. major. ass. hole...and that is putting it lightly.

I can't stand the man, and what he did to Dom is disgusting. Poor Dom. :(

I figured things had to get worse before they get better but I didn't see it going this way...I see dark clouds on the horizon, and I don't like it.

I wonder how Gee is going to react when he realizes that Dom took pills, not matter how much she fought it off. Drama for your mama. Can't wait for more.

Even though I hate what happened, I love the chapter. Can't wait to see what you cook up next. xoxo

Wow, this made me like pissed that there's only one chapter. I hope that guy gets the shit beat outta him soon!

I really liked the chapter hun. It was really good, and you know I would never lie to you, especially b/c your my bff. hehe

But in all seriousness, you know I feel about honesty. it was really well put together and I thought you did a great job with giving us time with how Mikey is feeling. I still want to know exactly what happened between those two! She obviously really cares about them.

I'm torn. I <3 her and gee but then there's mikey, and he's mikey. enough said. ;D

I'll just let it play out I guess. Can't wait to see where this goes. You need any late night brain storming sessions you know I'm here. <3

oh, and p.s. I love how Ray was all strong and silent in his little creative world. 'a man obsessed... the man with a plan Ray Toro.' :D

Okay, i just like... had a mini-heartattack when I got an email saying you updated! I was like... "FUCK YEAH!" Tehe, no one updates as much as I do I guess, but I love your writing. It's like... Skittles. Yes, your writing is like Skittles (: Love it!

I love this story... I was checking my email and when it said u upated, I was like "THAT BITCH MADE MY MORNING LOVELY!" (: Bitch is a term of endearment for me (: I love you! Update soon (:

well, you know I like cheese. :D

as Kate Winslet says in The Holiday (Don't judge me...): "I like corny, I need some corny in my life"

I think they are adorable together and I love how she blames him for her wanting another cigarette. He is a tempting motherfucker. hehe...what a beautiful man. They all are. love/hate them for that. lol

anyway, getting back to your beautiful prose. I really liked that little moment where they looked at themselves in the mirror. literally. It gave me a bit more insight into Dom, and Gee as well for that matter. She is still trying to cope with her addiction where he has moved on, they are both in different stages but heading in the right direction...I just really hope that Dom stays on the straight and narrow, if not for herself then for the boys. Although it never works being sober for anyone but yourself.

only time will tell I guess. Thank you love for sharing again so soon. I always love reading the inner workings of your imagination...even if it is at o'dark thirty in the morning, you are absolutely worth it. ;D

until next time I send my love and creative inspiring mojo. use it wisely.

Don't be worried, you did a beautiful job love. The description was just right and you didn't give too much up or leave too much out.

I really got a sense for their relationship and everything.

I feel bad for all three of them, Dom for having to deal with addition to not only drugs but to the Way brothers, and for Gee and Mikey for both being in love with the same girl. I want everything to work out for everyone but I know it can't.

Can't wait to see where you bring this. Wonder what Mikey is going to say when Gee sneaks back in from his disappearance...hehe.

oh and p.s., it's hard to choose but my favorite part had to be the description: '...the heat from her body extinguishing the numbing cold that had consumed him since she’d left him two weeks prior.' I just love that for some reason I can't pinpoint...the cigarette line was good too. ;D

as always dear, I love it. keep up the confidence and inspiration, I'm happy that you are still enjoying writing this story and have all these ideas. It's so great to see your creative process from inception to birth. <3

.... I feel for Mikey... :-\

I love it. I don't read many stories on here. I'm usually here for writing my own stories, but I can honestly say this one has my attention. Update soon, please! It's a wonderful story!

I really liked that chapter. I love that they are back in NYC! represent. lol

But really I liked the subty of the moments between them, how you break down how Gee is feeling. You know I love the details. (like the reference to Gee's collection of Mikey portraits. hehe)

I also really liked how she drew a picture of him to give him the message on the napkin. :D

Can't wait for the sexy time. ^_^ should be epic.

woo woo woo...you know it.

O_O She called Mikey! I was expecting her to call Gee. well, that obviously means that she still feels close to Mikey and that she cares about him/trusts him or she wouldn't have called him to talk her down.

And of course the Way boys and their coffee. ^_^ Those two are addicted, but everyone has their vices. I really enjoyed the 'I smell coffee' line too. hehe

I really hope that Dom doesn't do anything stupid...

Luke seems like a really bad guy. I hope that she's calling Gee to help talk her down from the temptation!

Can't wait to see what happens next. I see drama on the horizon. ;D

oh, and p.s. Horray for taking your comment virginity. lol

I'm really enjoying it so far Sadie. :D

Can't wait to see what happens with the Gee, Mikey, Dom love triangle. I feel shit hitting the fan on the horizon.

and poor Mikey, he is going to get his heart broke. :(

Hopefully in time all will be mended, and I really hope that Dom keeps her life clean and sober. only time will tell I guess.

Can't wait for more. <3